Sidni OS "May Be" Part 2 Punishment pg 5 *cmpltd* - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
omg such a emotional story😭
poor roshni y always she ve 2 suffer😭my poor doll😭😭😭
very well written dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome 
poor roshni😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
Emotional , sad but well written part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sad ending..
well written




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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh no what have i read.. such a sad story.. n u killed her off!! 🥺
Did u take out your frustration on sid by punishing him like this? 

Well written.. perfectly described emotions.. not at all a lame story 
Feeling kinda depressed after reading this actually.. 😵 LOL. It was amazing. . i wish u never killed her though !! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Damn...this was so sad!! 😭

But I really enjoyed your writing...you have portrayed the tracks beautifully and a special mention to that 👏

Very good attempt and very well written!! 👍🏼

Thank you so much for the pm!! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow dear...
Mind blowing ending...
Beautiful...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Poor roshni
Emotional update
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: paru10

Omg such a sad ending and super emotional update. I really loved SidNi confrontation when he came to her to say he will marry Misha. This is our Sherni Roshni. But the ending was so sad. But I guess it was needed because that's the only way she will be happy and Siddarth deserved it. Amazing OS. I loved it but it would be amazing if you make it a TS. I know you did mention no continuation but if you do it, it would be awesome. I seriously wanna read Sid's condition after her death.


Thank u paru for liking it...I am glad..ohkay will do but I hope it will upto the mark as I am not sure 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rachana10

Somewhat i guessed that how the end would be on this OS by seeing the title (roshni's separated from sidni😉)..


Omg!! What an emotional OS with sad ending..😭😭 Loved roshni's pov...SidNi convo was amazing😳 well written aroo..👏Letter part and the end was made me cry alot😭 but its needed and sid deserved that punishment for marrying misha..😡 I wish nothing like that would never happen to the show too.. Even i wanna see the continuation on this but w/o roshni/sidni i don't want that..😆😳  


Lol It sounds cool😉
Thank u racho...mi m so glad you liked it. ..lol as you say mam...you will get the continuation😉😃