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Anna1012

@Anna1012

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: navjotparmar
wowww... finally an update after wat seems like ages. yaar an update after so long n such a short 1 :( pls pls make ur updates a little long. u no u r an amazing writer n dis is d only story m religiously following on IF. pls b regular also. leave all oder ones n work onbdis only. dis is damn good.
N coming back to story OMG raghu gonna kinda rape her for some revenge? i thot hell just keep her wid him for life or something but dis twist gonna make dis story more interesting.
Keep writing. eagerly waiting for nxt update. n dis track will surely b a mindblowing one.

Thanks Dear...I will update soon..

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Anna1012

@Anna1012

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bluesky10
Awesome update
Waiting for the next one
Merry Christmas

Thanks...😊

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Anna1012

@Anna1012

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: BabyHimavari
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dont worry i will be unresing soon...😛.. glad that u re started this story...😳

unres
hmm... so now we got little glimpse of raghu's daily life... he is one tough ruthless gangster...
wonder how antara is going to cope up with him... it seems impossible right now...

sometimes I am feeling bad for antara... she is stuck in such a drastic situation... and she has no escape...

waiting to see how the story unfolds... all in all a good update with mystery continuing and getting denser... I still cant get clearly that why raghy actually kidnapped antu...

thanks for the PM...

Thanks Riyu...

😳😳

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Andrea D'Souza (Andy)

@RaNtara4vr

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

Woah...Kitna confusing hai...Kuch samaj nahi aa raha...😕......

Raghu ka kaunsa Revenge hai jo Antu ko barbaad karke hi usko milega...😲...🤔...

Antu is so innocent n clueless about everything around her...😔...

Aur Raghu ke friends aur unki jodidaron ki bhi koi back story hai kya...?...

Mujhe toh sab golmaal hi lag raha hai...🤓...

Continue soon... Waiting eagerly......

Awesome update, story is going great...👍🏼...

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Anna1012

@Anna1012

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr
Woah...Kitna confusing hai...Kuch samaj nahi aa raha...😕......
Raghu ka kaunsa Revenge hai jo Antu ko barbaad karke hi usko milega...😲...🤔...

Antu is so innocent n clueless about everything around her...😔...

Aur Raghu ke friends aur unki jodidaron ki bhi koi back story hai kya...?...

Mujhe toh sab golmaal hi lag raha hai...🤓...

Continue soon... Waiting eagerly......

Awesome update, story is going great...👍🏼...

Thanks yr...
I will update soon...

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