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Posted: 15 June 2015 at 3:29am | IP Logged
hey guys i m shreya
im n old member of this forum
wanna write an ff 
this story revolves around following couples-
Kavi-bulbul
ranveer-kashish
aabha-anurag
adi-lara

i want ur suggestions for this couple if u want anothe couple then plz inform
if u are intrested then i will update it

plz cmnt
bye

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SaNa_sTaRdinazz

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Posted: 16 June 2015 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Hey shreya!!  
I'd be glad to read an ff.. 
Do continue soon.. 
Will be waiting for an update.. 
And pls pm me..  since I am having a busy time I would read only pmed works..  I hope its fine with you.. Big smile


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Posted: 18 June 2015 at 9:06am | IP Logged
intro-
kavi n bulbul are married, ranveer n kashish are engaged ,anurag is dead bt  i will show abha n anurag's story , last night was engagement of ranveer n kashish

new morning-
in buero -
ranveer n kashish are reading a file (chup-chup ke romance)EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

mayank ,aabha n lara are watching them
Ma-dekho ranveer sir n kashish mam ko 
Aa-vo to hoga hi na naya naya pyar hai
La-vaise mayank tum kab kar rahe ho?
Ma-kya?
La-shadi
Ma-shadi??mai ?kyu?n kisse?
Aa-roshni se
Ma-roshni?
La-ha hame sab pata hai
Ma-kya pata hai?
Aa-yahi ki tumne n usne number shumber exchange kiya hai
Ma-ha to vo awai
La-awai? ab itna bhi mat bano yar
mayank was about to say something kavi came speaking on mob
Ka-are ha bulbul mai aate hue sabji lekar aaunga n tere liye kam vali bhi dhund li hai doper tak aa jaegi chal ab rakh bye
Ra-wah kavi tu to ekdum patni vrta ho gaye ho
Ka-bhai karna padta hai ek bar shadi ho gai na fir to gulam banke hi rahena padta hai,abhi tereko time hai sambhal ja
Kas-what?tum ise bhadkao mat
La-mam ko bahot jaldi hai shadi ki??
n kashish blushEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

then ACP comes
All-gud morning sir
ACP-gud morning,muze abhi abhi call aay hi bandra ke ek godwn me ek lash mili hai to ranveer n kashish tum dono vaha jao aur uski info yaha send karo
Ra,Kas-yes sir n they leave

ACP-adi kaha hai?
Ma-pata nahi sir aata hi honga
ACP-call karo use
mayank call adi bt his phone is switched off
Ma-sir mob band hai
ACP-thik hai thodi der bad try karte hai
again ACP got a call
ACP-khandala road par bhi ek lash mili hai kavi n mayank tum dono vaha jao
they leave

after sometime Adi comes
ACP-report kitne baje karna tha?
Aadi-9 baje
ACP-aur abhi kitne baje hai?
Aadi-10
ACP-late hone ka reason?
La-kahi rat ko party karne chala gaya hoga
ACP-party? aadi?
Aadi-nahi sir ye scientist kuch bhi bolti hai gave an angry look to laraAngryAngryAngry
ACP-to late kyu hua?
Aadi-sir vo
Aa-sir ranveer sir ne info bheji hai
ACP-ha dikhao
Aa-vaha jiski lash mili hai vo ye hai ,shows pic of body, iske pas mobile  ,kuch paise mile
ACP-matlab khoon paiso ke liye nahi hua
Aa-aur uske gale me ek ICARD tha MK college ka,iska nam vishal hai, n sir kavi sir ne bhi jo info bheji hai usme ek ladki ki lash mili hai uska nam neha hai n uske gale me bhi MK clg a ID mila n dono murder goli mar kar hi kiye hai
Aadi-sir lekin ID me year to 2013 ka hai yani do sal purana
La-lekin koi do sal purna ID pahenkar kyu ghumega
ACP-ek kam karo aadi tum n lara dono MK clg jao n pata karo
they leave

outside
Aadi-tumne ACP sir ke samne ye kyu kaha ki mai party karne gaya tha balki mai to kal tumhe chodne aaya tha, n aise nahi ki rat ho gai ho to jaldi chale bt nahi mam ko to aadhi rat ko icecream khani thi
La-ha to
Aadi-to matlab?muze tumhari vajah se late hua n upar se mera mob bhi band ho gaya tha , tum ho ki ACP sir ko mere khilaf bhadka rahi thi
La-use tit for tat kahete hai. tumne us din mayank ke yaha muze bhoot banke kitna daraya tab nahi yad aaya ye so called sharif insan?
Aadi-vo vo
La-vo vo chodo chalo abhi
n they leave

end part
hws it?
plz cmnt?

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SaNa_sTaRdinazz

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Posted: 18 June 2015 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
hey dear !
amazing update..
aww ! Mayank ki chori pakdi gayi !LOLLOL
Hmm .. so case has started...
cute nokh jokh between lara adi .. lara ko late night ko icecream khana tha ..!! LOLLOL
bechara adi ..LOLLOLLOL
thanks for pm..
continue soon..Big smile

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Posted: 19 June 2015 at 1:54am | IP Logged
Nise update please continue Smile
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Posted: 01 July 2015 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
Hey
Amazing start!
Ranvir-Kashish chup chup kar romance Embarrassed
Aabha teasing Mayank about Roshini was so funny and cute! LOL
Kavi talking to Bulbul on the phone and warning Ranvir was hilarious! LOL LOL
Aadi-Lara part was so sweet and adorable!
Loved it <3
Please please please update soon!
Really want to read more on this story Smile

Edited by SaNa_sTaR - 01 July 2015 at 6:28pm
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Posted: 02 July 2015 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Update !!!!!
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Posted: 19 July 2015 at 4:47am | IP Logged
Update soon pls !! 

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