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A Blast From The Past . OS

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Hey guys .. i am back with another OS ..
Warning - this might make you a little sad... 

A Blast From The Past 

This day he came as a blast from the past.
As i self served at the canteen ,he was in line next to me,
i started perspiring considering our proximity yet the distance.. i started to shiver as he came closer..
I closed my eyes for a second to control my tears, tears of nostalgia,sorrow and the bitter sweet memories ..
That day ,years ago he left without a word, not a Yes nor a No..
I never existed for him.He never loved me back,i just hoped some day he would,but that day never came.As he left,i felt unworthy and at loss of self esteem.. Daily,tears of sadness would stream down my face..i had started loosing weight due to lack of food intake and had become like a living skeleton,I had lost interest in my daily activities .. life had become dull and colorless just like the atmosphere would become gloomy and sombre during monsoons.. I became glum and suffered bouts of severe depression... I became isolated and suicidal..I had no one to live for but him..Some day i would try getting run down by a lorry , another day i would try slitting my wrist with a knife but would be saved by someone or the other.. I tried once, twice, and the third time i almost succeeded shooting my head off.. Yet i lived through the worse and gruesome treatments and electroshocks...just to see him this day...
Someone shook me out of my deadly thoughts and i resumed self serving , shaking away all the thoughts... i looked around and found him to be nowhere...
Oh , i hallucinated again ...

Hows it ??
Big smile

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 9:52am | IP Logged
EmotionalCry
Very nice..
Keep it upThumbs Up

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Laadifan12 Senior Member
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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 10:00am | IP Logged
Awesome os
Very emotional CryCryCry
Amazing amazing amazing 
Beautifully written 

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 10:44am | IP Logged
vry vry nice..
beautifully penned down...
emotional too
keep on writingWink

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 3:16pm | IP Logged

Very Lovely...EmbarrassedClap
for a Moment, I feel the Glum and Living Skeleton on My Self...CryCry
that Lorry, Knife even Head off...Shocked
so many Shocks and Gruesome Treatments I feel in My Body...OuchOuch
that Sadness, Pain and Hurt...Unhappy
but then I ve got I read Your OS...EmbarrassedClap
what a Lovely Aura U Created with Your Words...StarStar
Truly Sparkling...StarStar
Thank You so very much...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 7:52pm | IP Logged
Awesome...

beautifully written

do write more

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
Wow... I am very very impressed with this little piece of writing. 
I must say day by day you're writing skills are increasing :)

However I am intrigued to know as to why some of ur stories deal with a sudden adhoora pyaar... *thinking*

Jokes apart, good going girl!

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aditya_anjaana

EmotionalCry
Very nice..
Keep it upThumbs Up
thank you rifah !!Hug
i am glad you liked it !Big smile

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