*/FANTASY/* - Page 3

Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by samridhigoodiez


Beautiful Trisha.
Amazing. Continue soon.
But is it a fan fiction or just a fiction?
Thnx di..means a lot to me..:)
N ill post the next chaps there..
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by -Moon_beam-


resss
First coment by my diyu..πŸ˜ƒunres it fast..
Posted: 8 years ago
It's beautiful Trisha ...
You should continue to write more ... 

Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by --Lavender--


It's beautiful Trisha ...
You should continue to write more ... 

Awww..thnx di..πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 8 years ago
waoo... suph awhsomy.. suph amagin..
n suphbb

well writtn
loved itt...

continue soon
wud luv 2 read itt

n thnxx 4 d pm..Edited by ..khUshbOo.. - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by ..khUshbOo..


waoo... suph awhsomy.. suph amagin..
n suphbb

well writtn
loved itt...

continue soon
wud luv 2 read itt

n thnxx 4 d pm..
Thnx pasta
πŸ˜‰
I will for sure update dear
Posted: 8 years ago
  ***/PART UNO/***
My eyes popped open..on a white sheet..surrounded by the pale whit-ness of sorrow n peace..i lay on a hospital bed..
All my initial doubts got cleared as u saw my brother,holding my legs n wailing lyk a small girl.My eyes brrimmed with tears..shifting my gaze..i spotted my best friends crying too..unable to bear so much agony..i burst into sobs..my brother looked up n

THAPPP.
Came a LOUD slap.Though i could not see my face..i knew my cheeks had a photocopy of my brother's palm..
"They say u tried to commit suicide"
"N i beat them black n blue for uttering such nonsense"
I couldnt match his eyes bt just mumbled a meek.."yes"..
THAPP
Came another n another n another..colouring the initial STAMP a darker red..what?
Had they planned to implement all balaji serials on me?
"No one loves me"
I muttered..
THAP!!
Wow now!
Had this cannulla not been in my hand..they would have..for sure got a reply.
"Dare u say that u coward..
We never knew our friendship was so weak?"
Came one of my friends..
To my horrors..they all pounced on me..holding me tightly..lyk their dear life depended on me..crushing my petite body under their massive'gym-physics'
"We thought v lost you"
Came a throughly shaken voice..
This part sucks..i really dont knw why..isko tolerate krlo plz..agla i'll try n improve..
Love yo all..keep smiling
Trisha
Chapter two tomorrow..
-_-
Isko padh ke pm bhejne ka bhi man nhi kr rha..

Edited by arrodil_smile - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
***/Part dos/***


Pulling my eyelid shades up..i received a shock..
MAYA?
She came next to me n raised her hand..i shut my eyes anticipating a slap.But she put her hand on my cheek..caressing it.my life flashed before my eyes..
I,Asmin,lost my mother when i was 4 minutes old.Dad married another woman within a week n i got an entirely different lap to sleep.Everythin was like a fairytale without a witch until Maya was born..I was deported to a mere slave.
A small girl of six,instead of goin to school..washed dishesi in her home.

Had it not been for my grandmother's attempts,
I woukd have never seen a school. My father soon indulged himself in his brand new family n forgot about me.I went to school n got promoted to higher classes..but promotion in my home was something i longe for..i still washed dishes..

TIME passed n i had enjoyed 18 springs.It was as if she had been waiting for this day because when i returned from college that dayI was greeted with a ladoo.She had fixed my marriage with a 45-year old man.
One look at my father.. And i realised he was too happy to notice my groom's age.
I could not  let this happen to me.
I may not be brave..but i had something in my control..
I went to college next day..and rushed to the washroom before slit ting my wrists.. 
Tbc..
Keep smiling
Love you all
Trisha
P.s..dedicated to fiza..only person who rembered this..thanks darlo..
Edited by arrodil_smile - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
loved it
fantasy is my one of the favourite genre to write upon
and you write amazingly
update soon
thanks for the pm
Posted: 8 years ago
I find it spicy tadka...πŸ˜›
Dno why..!!
Par acha tha.. !!!
Sab bhul mat Jana Update karna !!🀣

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