Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Will be waiting to see how they will unite Edited by nostalgicmoon - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update...
poor geet😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by: khwaishfan

waiting 4 next part



i added this too in my updating list
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This content was originally posted by: uluvmg

Superb Update..πŸ‘
Maaneet are unhappy and hurt ... Both are sailing in same boat ..πŸ˜”
excited to see maaneet enjoying their life... together..
thanks for pm..!!


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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by: awesomepooja

nice update...
both r in pain...
the lady was so mean...


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This content was originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

niice part.
geet n maan both drifted into their past memories.geet remembers dev nd their frndship while maan in his past where he agree to marry to ragini just becoz of dadi.
maaneet for the first .bt won't see each other face nd remain as stranger .hoping meet in future again in future nd hv know more about them.

thnks for pm dear.


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This content was originally posted by: YaSha0512

nice update

both geet n maan thinking about their past
geet missing her friend Dev
n Maan thinking about marrying because of his dadi
sad it was dark when they met n couldn't see each other
but hopefully they will meet more at the park n get to know each other
thanks for pm plz keep em comin


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This content was originally posted by: sneharjun92

nice update. loved it.

dev n geet married to each other. 
but after dev is dead... geet is feeling alone.
nice convo between them.
waiting for next part.😊


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WOW!! outstanding part dear...loved it


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Part 3

Ye indhera kitna acha hai

Kam se kam

Roshani ki tarah aankho mein chubta toh nhi

.

.

She collided with someone, for protecting her, he held her by 

shoulders ... Due to darkness both not able to see whole face, but, 

both stare to each other...

.

Shi kaha aapne

Darkness is better from that light, where we smiles for society but nor for own...

Ye andhera khi acha hai

.

.

Sayad aap khud se naraaz hai

.

Sayad aap bhi

.

Sorry , andhere mein , mein aapko dekh nhi paayi

Aur aapse takra gyi

And thanks too

For saving me

.

Acha hai hum ek dusre ko nhi dekh paaye

Nhi toh firse ek jhooti muskan aur jud jaati

.

Good night

.

Same to you Miss

.

Miss

.

Ajnaabi rahe toh jyada acha hai

Km se km

Formality nhi hongi

.

Right Miss

 

            ********

Na jaane kya baat thi uski awaaz mein

Am feeling peace today

.

Shi kh rhi thi

This darkness is better from light

.

Sayad wo bhi dard me thi

Meri tarah

.

Kya usne bhi kissi aapne ko khoya hai

Meri tarah

          *******

Acha hai hum ek dusre ko nhi dekh paaye

Nhi toh firse ek jhooti muskan aur jud jaati

 

I don't know why I want to see him

.

Sayad isliye

Unki baatein mujhse milti thi

.

ya unki baton ka dard sayad mujhe mere dard se jod raha tha

.

Leave it geet

Wo ek ajnaabi tha

Jisse ab sayad kabhi na milu fir

          ********

New day come, she is busy in daily routine, and after this left for office... She crossing the path and see one of happy family, parents goes to drop child up to school...

Unknown tear reach in her eyes...her mother in law accusation ringing in her ears...

Issi ne jaan buzkar humare dev ke ansh ko maar daala

Geet : nhi maasi ji

Mein kaise apne hi bache ko maar sakti ho

.

Nirmala dekh liya apni bahu ko

Mein na khti thi

Isse shaadi na kr humare dev ki

Aakhir kha gyi na

Jaise apni maa ko kha gyi thi

Paida hote

Aur fir baap ko

.

Geet : maa

Aap hi maasi ko smjhaiye na

Wo asa na kahe

Dev toh mere liye sb kuch tha

.

Aur maa

Mera baby

Nirmala : bs geet

I don't want to hear any word

Tum mere bte ki aakhri nishani bhi nhi smbhal paayi

.

Dev ka hone wala bacha

Mere jine ki umeed thi geet

Ye tum bhi jaanti ho

Aur tumne mujhse wo bhi chin li

.

Geet : maa

Ek baar meri taraf dekhiye toh shi

Maa sirf aapki jeene ki umeed nhi chinni hai bhagwan ne

Meri bhi chin li hai

.

Maa khud ko bacha rhi thi mein

He tries to force me

Maa

.

Nirmala : kaun geet beta

Geet : maa

My boss

.

Ussi se bach kr bag rhi thi

Aur mera feet slip ho gya

.

Sch mein maa

Maine kuch jaan buzkar nhi kiya

.

Aur jb hosh aaya

Toh hospital mein thi maa

.

Maa

Before nirmala says, maasiji come in between...

Maasi ji : us bechare ki kya galati hai

Ek vidhwa

Yu rang berange kapde phnke

Sj swar ke gumengi

Toh asa hi honga na

.

Galat signal tune hi diye honge

.

Phle isne humare dev ko bhi toh asa hi fasaya tha

Apne roop ke jaal mein

Geet : maasi

Aap asa soch bhi kaise sakti hai

.

Maine dev se marte waqt wadaa kiya tha

Uski yhi aakhri khawaish thi

Mein  bilkul waise rahu

Jaise usse shaadi se phle rhti thi

Safed liwas mujhe chuye tk nhi

.

Bs ussi ki khusi ke liye

Maine ye sb

.

Maasi ji : ye toh bs bahana hai

Is ki aad mein tu

Aapni hasrate puri kr rhi hai

Nirmala : bs kriye didi

Geet tum apne kamre mein jaayo

Geet : maa

Ek baar khiye na

You trust me

Aapki geet asa kuch nhi kr rhi hai

Nirmala : geet abhi apne kamre mein jaayooo

I don't want to listen any word more

Maasi : nirmala

Nirmala : di

Mujhe please akela chod dijiye

Is pichle ek mahine mein itna sb kuch ho gya

Ab mein aur nhi sh sakti

Phle dev

Fir mere bte ki aakhri nishaani

Aur ab ye sb

Mujhe kuch smjh nhi aa raha hai

Kya sch hai

Kya jhooth

Kya shi hai

Kya galat

.

So please

Leave me alone

.

.

From past half an hour she was sitting on same bench, and as usual trying to know why she is alive today...

Kuch bhi toh nhi hai aaj mere pass

Apna khehne ke liye

.

Jinhone mujhe pyaar kiya

Maine unhe sirf dard diya  hai

.

Ab toh bs mein

In zimmedariyo ka boj do rhi hu

.

Geet office chl

Aaj toh boss bhi aane wale hai delhi se

 

                *************

He feeling unknown calmness, happiness today...after losing daadi and own child...he always feel his soul died...but today he feel little strange...why he smiling without any reason...

He remembered in old days he always smile like this...but after knowing daadi have cancer...one by one, he lost in darkness...

But why today, now I have nothing left for lost...

Yes, now he feared with happiness...after happiness always knock on the door i.e. sadness...

.

Maan don't think more

Sayad yaha ki hawa mein kuch khas baat hai

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Precap : both again meet or notπŸ˜‰

.

Note :- hey friends

This story is little different from my other stories

I hope you liked it

.

if you not liking it tell me clearly

i close this ff updates on IF

Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago