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ISHVEER FF: The sound of a broken heart discontinued

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Posted: 8 years ago
AN : So I had no plan of writing another ff while I am writing Always and Forever , but since KPLR requested I could not say no. I am really sorry for any typos and do please let me know what you think ? I really have never wriiten something this fast , so have no idea how it turned to be ?


Chapter 1

He had loved her with all his heart, he had always wanted the best for her. He had shown part of his heart and soul, part he had never shown to anyone. He had shared the pain of being judged by his past, even if he had climbed the ladder of success.

He laughed a dark laugh, remembering how she had asked in Disha 's function if it had hurt him by being called a driver ka betha. He had told her the true, and she had later said that she knew whose wife she was with a proud smile. All of it was just a lie; her friendship, care and love all a lie . For whom had she done all this for, Chirag, a guy who was nothing but a lie?

He felt a hand on his shoulder, and in that moment his heart hoped it was her. But to his disappointment, it was Ritika.

"I knew I would find you here, what did she say this time? " Ritika said angrily, she was tired of Ranveer keep getting his heart broken.

"She questioned if I knew what love is "Ranveer said, his eyes dark and his voice emotionless.
"Tell me why do I care about the Parekh family so much, when half of the family does not care about the teachings of Mota babu ji "

" Disha tried to rape me , she stole the diamond , left Manas with her child " Ranveer said disgusted.
" Sharman , kept suspecting yours and mine friendship. Even if he known that is was not that type of person I am, he left you and your child . "

" Devarsh , had not given his family the money I had trusted him with. He does not love his fiance , everything is mess . I am sure that Mota Babu ji and Falguni ma is crying watching over us. " Ranveer said , before he looked up at the stars on the sky and silently apologized his mentor for not being able to take care of his family.

He looked at Ritika and took her hand and said :

" I really do consider you as my friend , as my responsibility. I really do care about the baby , but I can't marry you or be the father of your child. Because I would never be able to keep you both happy, because I am a broken man. "Ranveer said, tears was running down on Ritika 's face.

" Leikin , Ranveer... "Ranveer stopped her , before she could say something more.

" I know you are a strong and independent women and would raise this child with good values , you will live in this house with my family they will take care of you both . If you ever need, you can call me "Ranveer said kindly.

"Call you, matlab ?" asked Ritika worried.
" I can't stay her anymore " Ranveer said , before he walked away from the terrace , never looking back.

On Ishani 's wedding day :

Ishani was adored as a bride, and she looked at herself as she was soon to be Mrs. Mehra. Someone knocked on the door and she thought it must be Krish.
"Come in "

Ishaani saw Shikhar and Ritika come on . Shikhar had a worried look on her face , while Ritika's face was full of wet tears. Ishani got really tensed and worried , by looking at them.

" What has happened ?" Ishani asked worried .

" Ishani , wo Ranveer ..." Shikhar started , but stopped because of Ritika 's sobbing. Ishani felt pain in her heart

" Kya hua Ranveer ko ?" yelled Ishani worried.

" Ranveer , wo Ranveer " Ritika was not able to say more , before she hugged Ishani

" Ritika, tell me what has happened to Ranveer " Ishani demanded now

" He is in coma " Shikhar said , and Ishani felt her word falling apart.


Chapter index :

chapter 2 on page 3 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4379848&TPN=3

chapter 3 and 4 on page 4 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4379848&TPN=4
Chapter 5 on page 6 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4379848&TPN=6
Chapter 6 on page 8 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4379848&TPN=8
Chapter 7 on page 9 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4379848&TPN=9
Chapter 8 on page 11    : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4379848&TPN=11           
Chapter 9 on page 12 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4379848&TPN=12       
chapter 10 on page 15 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4379848&TPN=15
chapter 11 on page 17 : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4379848&TPN=17Edited by MM123456 - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank u MM for accepting my request and writing this FF and i know u will do justice to us and about 1st chapter gud start ranveer in coma i guess more stressful time for ishani need 2 repent badly ishani for treating badly wid ur love...
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This content was originally posted by: KPLuvRadzz

Thank u MM for accepting my request and writing this FF and i know u will do justice to us and about 1st chapter gud start ranveer in coma i guess more stressful time for ishani need 2 repent badly ishani for treating badly wid ur love...



Your welcome , I really hope you like this FF 😉 Thank you so much for your belief in me , this ff will not be as dark as you want it to be but would show Ishani repenting   ðŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
Omg... this z awesome... do continue... but eee juz try to avoid hindi.. coz i can't understand  much hindi, n thr wl some silent readers as well.. so if u can plsh do us that favoUr
Thank u so much for making RV fall into coma 
I want to see ishani full of pain... cVs wl never do that.. but u wl do
wonderfully written
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Posted: 8 years ago
Good one MM... Hope there will be another chapter... 
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This content was originally posted by: MrsShaktiArora

Omg... this z awesome... do continue... but eee juz try to avoid hindi.. coz i can't understand much hindi, n thr wl some silent readers as well.. so if u can plsh do us that favoUr

Thank u so much for making RV fall into coma
I want to see ishani full of pain... cVs wl never do that.. but u wl do
wonderfully written



Thank you so much 😃 I am really happy you liked it 😉 I am sorry , I did not know I will try to awoid hindi and if I write hindi I will make sure to write translation with it ;)

I am really happy you liked this 😉
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This content was originally posted by: fan.matsh

Good one MM... Hope there will be another chapter...



Thank you so much 😊 Yes , this is a fanfiction so there will be more chapters   ðŸ˜‰ Just unsure of how many of them it will be , bacause I am writing another story as well 😊

But I will try to give both of the good time 😊
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This content was originally posted by: MM123456



Thank you so much 😊 Yes , this is a fanfiction so there will be more chapters   ðŸ˜‰ Just unsure of how many of them it will be , bacause I am writing another story as well 😊

But I will try to give both of the good time 😊



I am waiting for the next update  for both your FFs...
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I am waiting for the next update for both your FFs...



Aww so sweet 😳 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice one MM !! Thank you for accepting the request and writing a new one !! 😊

Keep writing !