FF .. # Mere Humsafar # chapter 28/52 - Page 19

Originally posted by: --pranu--

gud part cryu

naitiks uncomfortableness in dress and ghoongat on nighty🤣

and finally jhumki ka the end hogaya...

pillar scene was good and akshis darr was also reasonable and gud part

finally 4/5⭐️

omg thank u thank u thank u for liking it n for my stars

next part u update wen u like...

Originally posted by: --pranu--

u came ol through lappy?

nope lappy me net connect nahi ho raha isliye mobile se hi..
wo bhi mera mobile button wala fingers bahut dard karti hai :(

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

nope lappy me net connect nahi ho raha isliye mobile se hi..
wo bhi mera mobile button wala fingers bahut dard karti hai :(

Originally posted by: --pranu--

next part u update wen u like...

i will not force dis time.. :)

tum force karti ho tab bhi mai apne time par hi kar paati hu
kabhi kisi ki wish poori nahi kar paati

Originally posted by: --pranu--

awww so sryyy😳

don't be sorry...isme tumhari kya galti

Originally posted by: hirannaksh

tum force karti ho tab bhi mai apne time par hi kar paati hu
kabhi kisi ki wish poori nahi kar paati

i think u need rest tumhari haath mein pain horahi hogi na...

PART...26
NEXT DAY...
ITS 12:30 pm.
rj n nani both came in ak's room...
rj-akshara beta uth aur kitni der tak soyegi ?
nani-haa akshara tu uth jaa...rj tune apni beti ko kuch nahi sikhaya...sasuraal jakar ye kya karegi..." char baatien mujhe bulwa hi lete ho"
itna dialouge maarkar nani went from there...
rj came n sat on the bed...
rj(pyaar se )-meri bacchi...kya hua ?
akshara open her eyes...smile and put her head in rj's lap...
rj-kya baat hai bata naa
ak-kuch nahi maa...bas thoda sa ajeeb lag raha hai
rj-kis baat ke liye ?
ak-apne aur naitik ke life ke liye...
rj-jamai saa toh tujhse bahut pyaar karte hai naa
ak-haa maa...usme mujhe koi darr nahi hai...wo mujhse khud de zyada pyaar karte hai...par mai hu ki...
rj-akshara...tu uss baat ko lekar kyu pareshaan kyu hoti hai...jab jamai saa tera har kadam par saath dete hai...chal ab uth jaa...aur jaldi se khana khakar shaam ke liye pyaari si dulhan ban jaa...aur phir
she start crying
ak-maa...aap toh aise ro rahi hain...jaise ye mai pehli baar vida ho rahi hu...
rj-beti chahe ek baar vida ho...ya baar baar maa ko utna hi dukh hota hai...ab chal mujhe aur mat rula...
rj too went from there...
ak wipe her tears...
ak-meri life toh naitik se...aapse...bau ji se...aur di...se shuru hoti hai aur aap par hi khatam...
she got up quickly for her wedding preprations...
here naitik n mohit in nk's room...
naitik is peacefully laying on the sofa...and gave instruction to mohit...
nk-aree ye yaha nahi...thoda sa aur neeche...nahi yaar ye akshara ko bilkul accha nahi lagta...
mohit became irritated...
mo-bas...ab mai nahi kar sakta...subah se dus baar tu iska design badalne jaa raha hai...ab mai aur nahi saza sakta iss bed ko...itna hi suhaag raat manane ka shauk hai...toh khud saja le...aur mujhe maaf kar...
nk-dulha apni suhaagraat ki sez sajaye ye accha nahi lagta...
mo-shadi teri...aur saza meri...
nk-pls yaar...
mo-ok ok...aur tu ab nawab ban kar yaha late mat ja ready ho jaa...
nk-hmm...jaa raha hu aur tu jaldi kaam khatam kar...
mo-tu naa...
akshara start her make up n all...she start getting ready in her room...
when...
rj-aksharar ye parcel tere liye...bahar kisi ne diya...
ak-zaroor naitik ne bheja hoga...
she open that parcel...and beccame shocked
rj-ye kaisa gift hai
ak-haa maa ye white saree...
she became worried again
ak-maa mujhe ab sach me bahut darr lag raha hai...ye sab kahi naitik ko kuch
rj(shouts)-akshara...chup !
ak-maa mujhe naitik se abhi baat karni hai
she quickly calls him...
ak-hello naitik
mo-bhabhi mai hu mohit...
ak-naitik kaha hai ?
mo(sadly)-bechara nk...
ak-kya hua naitik ko wo theek toh hai naa
when naitik take phone from mohit
nk-haa akshara mai theek hu... mujhe sherwani fit nahi ho rahi thi...isliye
ak-naitik aap theek hai naa
nk-haa ak...mai theek hu...
ak-pls aap apna dhyaan rakhiyega
nk-aap hai naa mera khayaal rakhne ke liye...
ak-hmmm... love u
nk-love u too...
ak-theek hai aap shaam ko jalde se aaiyega
nk-badi jaldi hai mere paas aane ki...
ak-kyu aapko nahi hai kya ?
nk-jabse aap apne ghar par hai tab se mai aaj ka hi wait kar raha hu...
ak(blush)-bye !
nk-bye !
IN EVENING...
akshara wore a maroon colour bridal lehenga...sitting in front of mirror
when her frinds call
" akshara aa jaa baraat aa gayi "
akshara happily ran on the terris to see naitik
aur dekhte hi she closed her eyes " aaj apne saare ehsaas ko wo apni aankhon me basa lena chahti hai " har ek pal me wo inn khushiyoon ko jee lena chahti hai "
naitik too saw her standing there...
rj did aarti and greh pravesh of naitik...
naitik came n sit in the mandap...and pandit ji start his mantras for naksh's wedding...
pandit ji ask rj for bring akshra in mandap...and naitik smile that now his wait is going to end now...
ak's friend brought her in mandap...and make her sit beside naitik
and finally naksh look at eachother...Edited by hirannaksh - 8 years ago

nk(st)-bahut pyaari lag rahi hai aap...
akshara blush :)
mo-ahem ahem...
he cleared his throat...
mo-romance baad me pehle shadi toh kar lo
nk-hamari shadi ho chuki hai
mo-ha pata hai...toh nani ji ko batau kya ?
nk-tu naa
when pandit asked naksh to do the varmala rasam...
naitik akshara stood in front of eachother...and both exchange their garlands...
after that pandit start reading seven vachans...
when naitik...
nk-pandit ji
pj-kahiye beta
nk-hum chahte hain ki ye saat vachan hum khud ek doosre ko de...
pandit ji smile ( because he already know that naksh are married ) so they knew everything about these seven vachans...
pj-ji jaisa aap chahe beta...
naitik stand up from his place n forward his hand to akshara...
and akshara within a second put her hand on his and stood up from place...
both start their pheras...
nk-mai vachan deta hu ki mai apni patni ko har samaan...aadar...aur unka maan dunga...
ak-mai wada karti hu ki mai apne pati ka saath har kadam par nibhaungi...
nk-mai apni patni ko har khushi chahe wo choti ho ya badi...poora karoonga
ak-mai apne pati ko har khushi dungi...jo wo chahe...
naksh look at eachother...
nk-mai hamesha apni akshara ka hu...unhi ko pyaar dunga aur unhi ke saath rahoonga...
ak-mai...tan...mann...aur dhan se apne naitik ki thi hu aur rahoongi...
now in last phera naksh together...
naksh- hum saath milkar apne baccho ko acchi parvarish...sikhsha aur sanskaar denge...hum ek doosre ko barabar samaan denge...aur ek saath hamesha yu pyaar ke rishte me bandhe rahenge...ek humsafar bankar...
naksh again sat on their place
pandit ji ask naitik to fill ak's maang...
and he filled it seven times...
pandit ji-beta ise sirf ek hi baar bharte hai
mo-sahi kaha aapne pandit ji...par kya kare jab hamare dulhe raja ko dulhar saat janam ke liye chahiye
all guest laugh on this
and akshara became red...
after some time...
when all the rituals get complete...
now its time for bidai...but this time rj is happy that her beti got a perfect life partner...
naksh bid good bye to them...
and came near their car...
mo-chal aa jaa
nk-aree tu kaha aa raha hai...chal jaa did ki car me
ak-aane dijiye naa naitik...
mo-dekha tujhse acchi toh bhabhi hai...jaa mere dost biwi dobaara mil gayi toh dost ko bhool gaya...
nk-nautanki pls ye drama band kar...
mo-ok ( he smile ) mai jata hu...enjoy ur ride
but before going mohit gave a naughty smile to naitik
nk-ab iski hassi me zaroor koi raaz chupa hai...
ak-kya keh rahe hai aap naitik
nk-kuch nahi...chale madam...apni life ki new starting par
ak(happily)-ji
both sat in the car...and naitik start driving it...
IN THE CAR...
akshara put her hand on nk's hand...nd he looked at her
nk-kya hua ?
ak-kuch nahi I MISS U
nk- I LOVE U
he came near her to kiss
but
ak-naitik aage dekhiye...ye sab ghar par
nk-kya akshara poore ek din ke baad aapse mila hu...ab aap mujhse door kabhi nahi jayengi
ak-wada...
nk-accha aapke liye ek surprise hai...maine kaha tha naa
ak-kya ?
nk-peeche dekhiye
akshara look at the back side and saw beautiful pictures...
ak-wow ! naitik bahut acchi hai...ye hamare special moments ki pictures...
nk-hmm...
ak-ye sab hum apne mumbai wale ghar me lagayenge...
nk-jo aap kahe
ak-khaas kar ki ye wali...yaad hai ye fountain wali pic jo di ne {stop)
nk(smile )-aaj hamare iss precious din par no udaasi
ak-I LOVE U...I LOVE U FOR EVERYTHING...
when suddenly naitik stop his car
ak-kya hua ?
nk-ab mai aapko nahi jaane dunga
ak-par kaha?
he quickly came near her and kiss on her lips...
ak-naitik...ye kya tha ?
nk-mera pyaar...kyunki aap toh kabhi kuch kareni nahi
ak-accha...abhi dikhati hu...bahar nikaliye...
nk(shocked)-ak mai mazak kar raha tha...
ak-par mai serious hu...bahar nikaliye... Edited by hirannaksh - 8 years ago