OS BY NABANITA - Page 5

good one...Sharon's love for Swayam..
well written...I love this song
and was able to picturise them...
Sharon giving chocolate to the kid
so cute...sharon accepts Swayam with all the flaws..to her his imperfections seems fine
well qouted ...
loved the lines...a simple yet beautiful os.
loved the bond they share
its very rare to find people...like the Sharon in ur os and the world will be a beautiful place wen people realise love is a big responsibility...
do write more...
and thanks for the pm..

This content was originally posted by-..EnIgMa28..

hello gal

first os was bang on

as i told you already the concept is just wow

and a very mature thought thats the thing i liked the most in this os

you know loving a person with his inability is true love but taking the responsibility of the inability is greater

i loved the way sharon understood here and swayams thought process nice 

and the title in it is such a thing which makes you think so yeah

and with the last line you pulled it off soo well 

i liking your writing style

do continue with it

love *_*

thank u so much..mean a lot to me

Wow! Was this really your first OS? Amazing!!