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Manan OS: Her Shadow part 2/2 updated pg.6 ( may 18th) (Page 3)

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 2:07am | IP Logged
OMG.. it such a beautiful os..
i cant define how much i love it ...
they way u hve described nandiniz turmoil.. what shez going through,how she misses all those beautiful moments.. it just amazing...
n manik.. how can someone be soo loving n caring.. i mean he is doing evry possible thing to bring her back.. he wont leave her ever.. walk with her in every situation.. awwweee
im in love with this manan... both want the best for each othr.. n im sure its him whose behind hr..
btw i loved when she tried chcking his forehead he ws kissing her hand instead.. n the line he said about her disappearng image one..
all in all the best i hve read..
n this is truly my longest commnt till date..
plllzzz post the next part soon.. n ofcourse the short film too... :)

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 2:46am | IP Logged
That was really beautiful. The way you brought out Nandini's need for independence, to be herself; Manik's need to protect and care for her and the final collaborative enterprise - very much in character, therefore all the more beautiful.

Manik is watching her, isn't he?

Waiting for Part 2...

Love,
Serena

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 3:02am | IP Logged
It was just hell awesome.. I literally had tears... Keep going you are doing a great great great job

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 3:12am | IP Logged
Beautiful and very touching Smile

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Its amazing dea...Thumbs Up
plsss continue soonn
if possible pm nxt time

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 3:58am | IP Logged
Its so beautiful...The way u hv penned this down, I just don't have words to define its beauty and awesomeness...just beyond perfection...each emotion n feeling portrayed in a beautifully subtle way yet so precise that it directly is felt by heart and the eyes are making me realize their emotions and pain by continuously oveflowing while reading this...It just made me realize the importance of eyes...and the beauty they create in our lives...its so beautifully presented...ClapClapClap...Hats-off to u for this...

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 4:11am | IP Logged
jst beautiful...made me cry... loved it.. will b waitin fo ua nxt instalment

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 4:45am | IP Logged
OMG..!!! I am just crying like a fool whole the time reading this..thnx God my mama didn't saw me crying...yaaar what to say u made me speechless...I don't have words to explain my feelings...reading your os i came to know that vision is a great blessing...you wrote it so beautifully and the way Manik helped her was so loving...plzzz do write more I love ur writings...

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