#2 Asya ff unique love part 18-23 *thread links in the index* @ pg 1 - Page 63

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

You are such an evil girl sue😆

How can u stop at this point??😲

Well the update was excellent but sad too...

I hope she recovers soon n Eric spills the beans of the past to Asad.

Continue soon n a thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: skavya

Hey Sue...a very well written & emotional part...

How much AsYa missed each other...& all the fun & everyone was happy...

but all get ruined with this twist...

How can you stop there...now please continue soonish...

Thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: suganti

awesome and emotional chapter.

love the haldi sequence.

OMG..zoya got injured badly by the knife..hope nothing happens to her.

happy to see everyone's love for zoya.

waiting for the past to be unfold now.

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Sue

this time I m not late😆
hehee...ya ur not😆

so haldi ki rasm is going

ASya didn't liked getting painted yellow & were restless 2 see d other

Sibling teasing was nice scene
siblings hote kisliye he akhir? chidhane ke liye na??😆

I m confused knife is tarah tha wahan & no1 noticed its unbelievable😲😕 4 me its error cuz itna bda chaku jo kisi ke seene ke paar ho jaye aasani si dikh skta hai
yep...ur right...but imagine a room full of guests busy in the function and table par itna saara samaan ho...to kisi ko chaaku kese dikhega yaar...yehi to us attacker ki haaath ki safai he😉

& funny part is CCTV lgane aur tight security ke baad bhi haadsa ho gya😲

phir Zoe ki shoulder pe lga I agree blood lose ki wajah se she must have fainted but raat tak hosh na aana is weird 😲😕
cctv ki help aaage truth reveal karne me lenge asad aur ayaan
nd haan raat tak na hosh aane ka reason bhi aage aayega
wait to kar zara😆

Sue yeh kuch zayada hi creative liberty le li tune😆😆

kher every1 was tensed & prayed 4 Zoe

Eric was just like a baby even Asad realized Zoe means a lot 2 him

& finally truth is about 2 come out

I m confused if I want updt soonish or not cuz I want 2 know d raaz but scared cuz of my guess😕

besides Happy ending hogi who toh I know Sue but physical torture 2 Asya is unbearable 2 read but as u said ab change nahi kar sakte. Agla part main shayad na pad paun😭

 

Originally posted by: Chahanya

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Originally posted by: Amin21

very emotional update😭

how everything was going well.

but everything happens for a reason 

now asad will find out about zoya's past

eagerly waiting

do try to update ASAP

Originally posted by: NaughtyRiya

awesome update
like it

Originally posted by: nikii11

ressy

unressy

omg

😲

awesome piece of writing

it was lik I am watching tv show or a film..
hehee...thanku so much nikita
its a big compliment 4 me😃

I  was glued to it till the end

both wer craving for each other

sab teasing nd all fun

thuddd a twist in the tale

someone had placed knife in the center table 😲

nd zoya shoulder was sliced..the aim was her heart...bapre ithni katarnak saziish...😲

and haldi turned red due to her blood

this was bloody update filled wth mystrys...

asad got a shock...

admitted her...

eric was shattered cant liv wthout zoe

asad eric bonding nice

nd eric gonna say abt zoe past

aage kya hoga reveal fasttt jaldi karooo😡

orelse i'll plan to murder u  wth invisible knife hehehe🤣😈😈

 

 

 

 

Originally posted by: nikii11

continue fast orelse

Originally posted by: ksen

Wonderful update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm