Jodha Akbar


Jodha Akbar
Jodha Akbar

Akdha OS {{{Dramaqueen}}} Note Pg 7 (Page 4)

Geetbaala IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Nice os..
Continue soon.. Waiting for part two.

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amSavindi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 8:41pm | IP Logged
awesome dr..congrats for ur first ever and new story..continue soon..eagerly waiting..tks for the pm dr..

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deepa111 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
nice os dear.nd funny too.
congrats for first writing .
plz update secnd part soon nd pm me.

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Sweetshruthi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 3:44am | IP Logged
Nice os .. good start.. continue plz

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aswin2134ja IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 3:48am | IP Logged
update soon pm me eagerly waiting for nest chapter

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history_geek IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 5:45am | IP Logged

Thanks for informing.
Reminds me of an Akbar Birbal story.
Very Nice effort. :)

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Posted: 17 May 2015 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
Part - 2
Akbar sat on d couch holding d letter in hand "Jalal aj to tumhari shamat ane wali h... Jodha begum to wakei aj bahut gusse me h!!! Ya Khuda, bacha lena apne bande ko..."
"Abbujaan, Abbujaan kya hua??? apke chehre ka rang kyu uda hua h?? Koi mushkil h kya???" asked Aram as she saw Akbar sitting like a ghost with a scared face.
"Yes baby, ek bahhhut badi mushkil a pari h!!! Humari kisi ajij ne humse pura din na milne ki than li h.. Upar se humse bahut gussa bhi h..."
Aram said giggling "Abbujaan u r talking about Jodha ammijaan right??"
"Yes my baby, I am talking about d Sherni" came from d colour drained face.
"Offo!!" slapping her head "phir to hum bhi kuch nhi kr sakte... Koi aur mushkil hoti to hum use abhi bhaga dete.. pr Ammijaan!!! Ab to Allah ka wasta.." said Aram like a grandmother running out.
"Jodha begum, I finished all my work early today to spend quality time with u n u left me alone... Now how can I live d whole day without seeing your face my darling angry wife" Akbar thought aloud.
The day seemed like d longest to d impatient husband n he was cursing d Sun for not going down hurriedly!!! Finally d much waited evening came n he rushed to d lake house. Just before entering d house his pace became slower with d thought in mind "Oh God my Sherni is gonna eat me alive!!!"
He slowly pushed d door n found d room captured in nothing but utter darkness.
"Jodha begum, Jodha begum r u there???" getting no answer from her "Why the hell is this room so dark!!! Is she all right??" he said scared. He brought d mashal (flambeau) from d outside wall n went inside d room... With d light that was only able to lighten up a little of d large room he saw a lady sitting with her back towards him in d farthest corner of room... "Jodha begum..." he called slowly.
"Who is it???" d reply came from a stern female voice.
"It's me,  Jalal" Akbar said feeling relaxed after hearing her voice.
"I know. But that wasn't my question. My question was whether it is d shensha or my Husband???"
"hmm, well it's NOT d shensha but it's YOUR Shensha" he gradually stepped forward n sat beside her on d bed...
"What!!! I said I want my husband here, not any shensha."
"It IS your husband here my angry sweetheart" he said touching her chin trying to make her look at him "well, what to do Jodha begum u call me shensha only... not Jalal, so I said it's YOUR Shensha. Agar ap hume Jalal bulati to..." he said mischievously.
She pulled her head away n said "Oh really!!! Here I'm mad at you n u think I'll call  u by your name!!! Never!! Forget it!!!" then added "agar ap hume Jalal bulati to... huhh!!!" copying him with a tongue.
Akbar controlled his laughter very hard knowing it would make his already khafa wife more gussel...
"Sweetheart please forgive your buddhu pati.. It won't happen again I promise. I'll always make time for u from now on. I'll leave all my work, I won't touch a single matter, no matter how important it is untill I'm done romancing with u. After all how can my sultant come before my wife's farman!!!"
She felt bad n said "When did I ask u to ignore d sultant for me... I just wan" that is when she noticed him smirking n busted into anger "Oh so you tricked me into saying this!!! Jallad kahika!!.."
"What!! What did u just call me Jodha begum.. Jallad!! Fine, to phir ab se hum bhi apko Gussel Chudail bulaenge."
"Kya!!!!" she turned towards him in an instant n continued "hum apko chudail dikhte h shensha!! Thik h koi jarurat nhi h apko iss chudail se baat karne ki!!! Ja satke h ap!!"
Akbar gasped just as she turned. She looked no less than a goddess in the dim light. He took her hands in his n said "I was just joking Jodha begum, hume muaf kr dijiye... Pleeease" 
Jodha pulled her hands n said in a devastated tone "You don't give a damn that I'm angry, do you shensha??"
Akbar felt really guilty, it was his fault after all... He couldn't see his darling wife like that. He cupped her face n said "I am really sorry sweetie... Please forgive me... On a serious note I'll really spend more time with U from now on. You know na my day starts with u n ends with u only... Please forgive me sweetheart... Please"
"No. I don't want to talk to U. Chale jaiye ap yaha se... Jaiye!!!" came from a agony filled angry voice.
Akbar tried to hug her with a sad n concerned face but Jodha being d angry hurt stubborn queen again pulled away with raging lowered eyes.

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AfraSiddiqui Groupbie

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Posted: 17 May 2015 at 6:03pm | IP Logged
Promo - Surprize surprize!!! There's a really nice surprise in d next (last) part n I promise that part won't be as boring as this one.
plzzz leave your precious comments it encourages me a lottt n thank u all for your previous comments Smile
I know guys this part is really really boring n I really won't mind if u kill me for this Dead but just remember if u kill me u will never know what the surprise is!!Wink LOL
My sincere apologies for not making it up to your expectations Cry

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