akdha os-The beginning of the new life - Page 4

Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome OS 
Beautifully written πŸ‘

Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by VincyAnne


OMG Jodha how could you think of aborting your child???!!! 😲
Poor baby, poor Jalal 😭😭😭
Jodha this is not right yaar, no matter how much you hated Jalal for 'touching' you, you shouldn't say this kind of words... 😑 😭yeah..😭but she hated him before that day too
Of course Jalal was in the wrong too but.. but oh all 3 of them are pitiful... 😭😭yeah..but he is her husband..and he didn't it intensionly..

She kept the baby?! 😲 πŸ₯³
Aww Jalal kept his distance with her though not really as he kisses her at night 😳😳 afterall she is his love na..
Poor Jodha, she felt bad for saying all those words before.. 😭😭😭yeah..she must be,beacause she used those words to her own baby..
It's a boy !!! πŸ₯³ Aww Jalal is happy but Jodha is sad as Jalal is still keeping his distance...
Loved the convo between mom and son. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Glad Jodha stopped him but duffer why didn't you tell him you love him!!! 😑😑😑
Jalal poor thing is so broken... 😭😭😭
Aww she kissed him when he was asleep 😳
She said the 3 words?! And she stood at the balcony with Salim to send him off?!😲like every WIFE she too watched her husband going to his work
Finally she confronts him, and they talk it all out πŸ˜ƒ
What a lovely end to a lovely OS.. πŸ‘

Good Job Savvy !!! πŸ‘πŸΌ
Posted: 8 years ago
lovely os di...
Thnx for the pm...
Posted: 8 years ago
wow dear very nice os thanks for the pm.kisne kaha aap acche writer nahi ho aap bahut acche writer ho.
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by VincyAnne


Unres the post in pg 2 alreadyπŸ˜‰
oook..
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by swetiii


suprb dr..
its amazing
thank u dr..😳
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by swetiii


sorry dr my like button is not working
its ok dr. .no problem..
Posted: 8 years ago
very cute and lovely OS. 
thanks for writing.
Posted: 8 years ago
awesome os love it
keep writing dear
Posted: 8 years ago
wow...so beautifiul os .
very nice.

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