Originally posted by: EMOksgian
hey hii thxx fr pm :) I likd dis concept and update vs nice !!
I don't like asad being dominated by shireen u no asad's behaviour vs his friends fr midnite tea vs more like teenager not at all like a grown up man a doctor , he listen her kk never argue her fine bt vere is a strong headed asad sry I couldn't find him here may be u vl explore later ...
and don't u think its too early fr realization to end dis khamoshiyan ... its like v r in some hurry plzz don't mind plzz I m a bit analytical reader :) otherwise I liked ur story so much continue soon :)
About Zoya's realization, the thing is the real story is actually far away...that's the reason...and with Zoya's troubled characterization, I need a different way to take this story forward...Asad's character you will get to know later as he has a troubled past and a troubled life with only few friends who cheer him up...and yeah, he is not too elder too 😉
So, just wait as the story will shape up with some more updates 😊
Edited by --Aishwarya-- - 8 years ago
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