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Short Story: The Unheard Cries For Help. (Page 3)

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Posted: 06 June 2015 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
I have far too many words to say, far too many. If I could pen down the endless, incoherent, tangled thoughts and words, I would have. But I can't. I can't. What I read shook me. Shook me hard. I felt every raw and real emotion, the numbing pain. You are hands down my new favorite writer in this forum. And I am gonna stalk your works. Don't say I didn't warn you. :P

It's beautifully tragic, gut wrenching and devastating; your work and your writing. 

I am blown, woman. I am blown. Thank you for this mind freeze. 

-A

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Posted: 07 June 2015 at 12:18am | IP Logged
well done
suicide is something people choose when they are at dead ends
but one should understand the fact that suicide isn't the thing giving one chance and a strong step can change the life for good
your story is passionate
and the words actually describe the intensity of a depressed person
the protagonist response to Sharona's console made the chapter
Sharona's words too were intense and something that actually a person needs when he/she is at the dead end
just saying 'everything will be alright' doesn't go always
a proper support is what a person needs when he wants to survive or even if he doesn't but others want
your story is something that actually captivates the reader
keep writing
update soon

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