# MY WORLD'S KING # MaNan FF (UPDATED PART 23) Pg131 29/8 - Page 22

Finally you updated :)

Lovely update ,
but what was that the ending ,
it has seriously struck in my mind. Wow that was really hawttt.
Update the next part soon .
And Parth will be get well soon as he has all these well wishes for him ,so don't worry .

Thanks for the Omanis updated
Loved everything about this update and finally the last part was awesome

first of all I want to hug u tight,*huggg* 😊

u r an amazing writer [;Y:]
terrific 😊 👍🏼

it was like I was not reading an update,it was like I was watching each n every scene 👏

live scenes,I can say 👍🏼

u r fab,

um speechless ,don't have words to praise u,coz my each word will mean nothing in font of ur talent

abt update,it was awsm,superb,speechless *STANDING OVATION*👍🏼

full of intensity 😳

I jus love d desperate manik,who desperately wants her to stay with him 😳

and d last space college scene,wr he pulled her in an empty room n that sensational kiss was cherry on d cake 😳 😉 👍🏼

Nyc update their kiss scene was amazing u r very good writer keep writing like dis

thanks for da PM

finally u r back with a bang...nice update...keep it up...n continue soon

Awesm 👏 just loved it
It was so intense
Love thr fight
Do continue soon
Pm me

awesome update
loved it

nice update..suspense... is it nandini' s dream 😳 or reality😉

Lovely