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janvi.sadhwani Senior Member
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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 10:46pm | IP Logged

I wrote this while sleeping :p pardon me if you don't like it ;) :D 

' sorry but i won't marry you mr singh . The contract doesn't says so ' Avanti , virat's contract bound secretary shouted on the top of her voice when virat for the 4th time asked her to marry him that very day 
' dekho , its very simple ' virat brought his hands parallel to eachother in front of his face and said ' you have to follow what i say ' 
' virat be professional ' avanti told him in an ugly tone 
when virat pins Avanti to the wall , making her files to fall down ...

' virat ' avanti whispered in his ears ' shhh ' replied virat and brought a finger to her lips 
' i love you avanti , give me a try ' 
listening to this Avanti burt out in laughter 
' what the hell ' virat was confused and he asked ' sorry sorry , ase propose karoge to bhikhari ki acting bhi na karwaye koi tumse, phateechar ...' avanti explained him and ran away from that spot cause she knew virat would catch her

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 2:51am | IP Logged
I like those small interaction dialogue you write ! 
short but really nice to read ! 

keep it up ! 


janvi.sadhwani Senior Member
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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by misssmily

I like those small interaction dialogue you write ! 
short but really nice to read ! 

keep it up ! 



Thank you so much :D Means a lot Tongue
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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Wow very nice ...Thumbs UpWink  keep it up
janvi.sadhwani Senior Member
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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by poojakondal

Wow very nice ...Thumbs UpWink  keep it up

thank you <3 

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