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SidNi 5S: A Fantasy Wedding (Epilogue pg 42) *25/07* (Page 41)

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Posted: 25 July 2015 at 6:05am | IP Logged
very well written epilogue and the dialogue jo chandiniroshni deti hai woh mere paas haiEmbarrassedWink was superb and the song and the scenario u put up also matched very well
beautifully written starryClap and u presented it in a subtle way i loved it and enjoyes reading starryStarClapEmbarrassed

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Posted: 25 July 2015 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zoopassion

AwwEmbarrassedEmbarrassed That was such a cute and beautiful update and a perfect ending to the 5SEmbarrassed Loved it, keep writing moreSmile
 
thank u so much..I am happy u liked the end!Smile
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Posted: 25 July 2015 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .chandni.

marvelous end 
 
thank you..Smile
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Posted: 25 July 2015 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sowiee

Awww...myyy. Gawddd...
What an update..

Read wedding bidaai and epilogue at once...

Can't describe how I felt by reading the update...its outstanding...

Liked how sid was searching for the sherwani and how he chose the sherwani... 

And the naughty things happened while welcoming the bharaat..

And naughty sid very fast n in hurry to marry roshni...

Badai was lil emotional... how nicely u described all the persons feelings...

Liked how sid assured dd.

And epilogue was aww...how cute... Roshni gift was outstanding and sid s gift was out of the world...

He just expressed how much he love her in just one action..

Congratulations for this 5S

Looking forward for this kind of works of urs 
 
Thank u so much..for not being able to describe but still describing it so wellLOL
Happy u liked sherwani scene and I thought bidaai one was totally off but happy that u liked it too..
glad you liked the gifts!Embarrassed 
Happy i could entertain u with this 5S..

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Posted: 25 July 2015 at 6:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prathe

very well written epilogue and the dialogue jo chandiniroshni deti hai woh mere paas haiEmbarrassedWink was superb and the song and the scenario u put up also matched very well
beautifully written starryClap and u presented it in a subtle way i loved it and enjoyes reading starryStarClapEmbarrassed
 
happy u liked that dialogue..Smile
glad u liked the whole setup i gave , i tried tk give my best..I am so sorry if it didn't match ur expectations!
Thanks for all the appreciation!

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Posted: 25 July 2015 at 6:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Starsfireflies

Originally posted by prathe

very well written epilogue and the dialogue jo chandiniroshni deti hai woh mere paas haiEmbarrassedWink was superb and the song and the scenario u put up also matched very well
beautifully written starryClap and u presented it in a subtle way i loved it and enjoyes reading starryStarClapEmbarrassed
 
happy u liked that dialogue..Smile
glad u liked the whole setup i gave , i tried tk give my best..I am so sorry if it didn't match ur expectations!
Thanks for all the appreciation!
starry no sry and all ok  Big smile     u wrote it very well to be honest am nt comfortable in reading ott romantic scenes so in that sense i loved how u presented it ClapStar cheers starryHug

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Posted: 25 July 2015 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prathe

Originally posted by Starsfireflies

Originally posted by prathe

very well written epilogue and the dialogue jo chandiniroshni deti hai woh mere paas haiEmbarrassedWink was superb and the song and the scenario u put up also matched very well
beautifully written starryClap and u presented it in a subtle way i loved it and enjoyes reading starryStarClapEmbarrassed
 
happy u liked that dialogue..Smile
glad u liked the whole setup i gave , i tried tk give my best..I am so sorry if it didn't match ur expectations!
Thanks for all the appreciation!
starry no sry and all ok  Big smile     u wrote it very well to be honest am nt comfortable in reading ott romantic scenes so in that sense i loved how u presented it ClapStar cheers starryHug
 
Okay and to be honest I have read much much more when it comes to these type of scenes but just didn't have it in me to write like that!

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Posted: 25 July 2015 at 7:02am | IP Logged
@starry u write wat u can write and in which u rr comfartable  rest all  falls into place automaticallySmile

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