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SidNi 5S: A Fantasy Wedding (Epilogue pg 42) *25/07* - Page 31

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very well written epilogue and the dialogue jo chandiniroshni deti hai woh mere paas hai😳😉 was superb and the song and the scenario u put up also matched very well
beautifully written starry👏 and u presented it in a subtle way i loved it and enjoyes reading starry⭐️👏😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by: zoopassion

Aww😳😳 That was such a cute and beautiful update and a perfect ending to the 5S😳 Loved it, keep writing more😊

 
thank u so much..I am happy u liked the end!😊
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thank you..😊
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This content was originally posted by: sowiee

Awww...myyy. Gawddd...

What an update..

Read wedding bidaai and epilogue at once...

Can't describe how I felt by reading the update...its outstanding...

Liked how sid was searching for the sherwani and how he chose the sherwani... 

And the naughty things happened while welcoming the bharaat..

And naughty sid very fast n in hurry to marry roshni...

Badai was lil emotional... how nicely u described all the persons feelings...

Liked how sid assured dd.

And epilogue was aww...how cute... Roshni gift was outstanding and sid s gift was out of the world...

He just expressed how much he love her in just one action..

Congratulations for this 5S

Looking forward for this kind of works of urs 

 
Thank u so much..for not being able to describe but still describing it so well😆
Happy u liked sherwani scene and I thought bidaai one was totally off but happy that u liked it too..
glad you liked the gifts!😳 
Happy i could entertain u with this 5S..
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This content was originally posted by: prathe

very well written epilogue and the dialogue jo chandiniroshni deti hai woh mere paas hai😳😉 was superb and the song and the scenario u put up also matched very well

beautifully written starry👏 and u presented it in a subtle way i loved it and enjoyes reading starry⭐️👏😳

 
happy u liked that dialogue..😊
glad u liked the whole setup i gave , i tried tk give my best..I am so sorry if it didn't match ur expectations!
Thanks for all the appreciation!
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happy u liked that dialogue..😊
glad u liked the whole setup i gave , i tried tk give my best..I am so sorry if it didn't match ur expectations!
Thanks for all the appreciation!

starry no sry and all ok  😃     u wrote it very well to be honest am nt comfortable in reading ott romantic scenes so in that sense i loved how u presented it 👏⭐️ cheers starry🤗
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This content was originally posted by: prathe

starry no sry and all ok  😃     u wrote it very well to be honest am nt comfortable in reading ott romantic scenes so in that sense i loved how u presented it 👏⭐️ cheers starry🤗

 
Okay and to be honest I have read much much more when it comes to these type of scenes but just didn't have it in me to write like that!
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@starry u write wat u can write and in which u rr comfartable  rest all  falls into place automatically😊
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@starry u write wat u can write and in which u rr comfartable  rest all  falls into place automatically😊

 
ya you are right..thanks!😊
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This content was originally posted by: heemasomani

Superb epilogue

 
thnxx!😉