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NEW ISHRA TS : DHAKKAN's Diary Epilogue ON PG 18 UPDATED 08-6-15 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wowww...it soundss veryy interestinggg...
Pls pls pls continue it soon n do PM me...😳
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cute story😊 loved d way u r telling d storyπŸ˜ƒ cont it & if possible plz pm me
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Originally posted by: --Rashmi---

Awww...
It's so beautiful.
Cute story.
Loved the way u wrote it. Totaly different with ur others.
Plz don't end this as a TS.
Update sn.
Tnx 4 pm
Edited- 1st one 2 comment on ur new story. Just realized.



Haahaa Yes 1st One Thnx so much for lovly comment Sorry but this is only TS after that i ll start a New Story

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Hey! That looks interesting. Dhakkan's diary in the hands of Puttar. Lets see what secrets come up.
Continue soon. Thanks for the PM!



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Haahaa Yes 1st One Thnx so much for lovly comment Sorry but this is only TS after that i ll start a New Story


Ok. Waiting 4 ur new story. Bt update this one sn.Edited by --Rashmi--- - 8 years ago
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REACP :

After entering her room , I saw the asprin's box right at the table. I took some and jumped on to Miss Dhakkan's bed to sleep. As I laid on her bed, I could fell something under the Pillow.

Due to the overwhelming curiosity, I took it out only to find :
A diary ...no its


Dhakkan's diary


PART 2

RAMAN's Narration

 

I shouldn't have read dhakkan's diary but I am glad I did , because it changed my life for the better.

 

 

So due to the curiosity burning inside of me , I took her diary out. The dairy was blue  in colour and on the cover the word " Dhakkan's diary " was written in Golden.

 

I thought she hate this name Dhakkan bcoz she always said me dont call me Dhakkan i hate this name...Strange hai yar...agar use Ye naam pasand nahi to rakha kyu...

 

Now

I remember this diary from Dhakkan's birthday when she tried to hide it from me. I didn't know she was using it as a personal diary but thought she was hiding it from me so I wouldn't copy her homework. ohh , I was wrong.

 

 

I tried to open the diary but their was a number lock.

 

 

I thought for a while and tried complex combination like :

 

 

12345

 

 

67890

 

 

But none of them working...ohhh her birthdate

 

141084

 

Ohhh uski birthdate bhi nahi hai to kya hoga... I was about to give up bcoz i was frustrated but I gave one last try.

I slowly kept the numbers in my birthday...

 

 

231183

 

And it opened. Ishita wasn't so intelligent as I thought.

 

One min...

 

Why my birth date...ohhh god why my b'date ye Dhakkan bhi naa...jitna hoshiyar apne aap ko samzti hai utni h nahi...meri b'date rakh li taki agar mujhe kabhi diary mili bhi to main meri b'date try nhi karunga but u r wrong my Dhakkan...haha i opend...

 

As I opened the diary a thought came to me ," Why do girls keep diary , just so others can find out their secrets."

 

Chuckling at that thought I opened the diary . The first page was blank . But the second page,

 

oh my goddd--

 

I never thought ... but how could she ... hide her real feelings for so long.

 

 

On the Second page "I LOVE U RAMAN"

 

Third page...

 

my name was written all over the page inside ouside surround by  hearts.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maine Kabhi dhakkan ke liye esa nahi socha tha. I couldn't I got a huge shock which literally paralyzed me to turning the next page of the diary.

 

 

So I closed her diary and kept it the way it was.

 

 

I got out of the her room thinking deep thoughts.

 

ishita  was there always for me in the most crucial times of my life.

 

 

Dhakkan was their for me supported me when my Papa died and got me out of that miserable time.

 

helped me when i need someone

 

 

 

Dhakkan always with me when I was losing control of my hard feelings and many other times, stayed along with me to support me everytime.

 

 

 

Dhakkan is my best friend and the only friend that has been with me through the upside down of life.

 

 

So I decided to talk to Ishita tonight.

 

 

And as Bala was going out , it would be the perfect time to ask her.

 

 

I waited for Ishita to come home.

 

 

Mujhe waisa feel kyu nahi hota jaisa use mere liye hota hai?

 

After all Ishita and Bala were the only ones with me through the toughest times and she was the one who made me feel better about everything.

 

 

I had caught ishita staring at me but I felt that I was handsome as many girls in college used to flirt and stare at me.

 

 

So I didn't take it seriously . But Ab bahut der ho chuki thi , Maine ye realize kyu nahi kiya ?

I mean come on , main uska vest friend Hoon. I am supposed to know naa these things.

 

 

I had waited for her for hours,

 

Kaha gayi ye Ladki akeli ? i greeted my teeth

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Posted: 8 years ago
omg poor raman
dude kitna wait kregi tera??
awww he got jealous so cute
hope kr its only a drama