A Manan,Dhruv n Cabir SS:No one can tear us apart(new prt Tsrs pg 3) - Page 2

Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Super Interesting start 
Posted: 8 years ago
Part 2:-
Nandini:-Good morning Cabir,Dhruv n mom.
Nyonika:-Good morning beta.
Dhruvbir:-Good morning Nans.
Manik:-Good morning people.
Everyone:-Good morning.
Nyonika:-Guyz please have ur breakfast cauzr u all r coming with me to S.P.A.C.E as I too had some urgent work overthere.
Nandini:-Thanx mom for coming with us that too on our first day to college.
Nyonika:-Ur most welcome my baccha.
Cabir:-Waise few minutes back jab tu stairs seh aa rahi this toh itna blush kyon kar rahi thi.
Dhruv:-Maine bhi dekha tujhe.
Nandini:-What ...have u guyz l..lost it .I was not blushing at all .
Cabir:-Then why r u stammering.
Nandini:-Guyz while eating we should not talk its very bad for health.
Nyonika:-Enough of ur nonsesnse Cabir n Dhruv,stop pulling my sweethearts leg.
Cabir:-What aunti?Abb hum apni friend ki taang bhi nahi kheech sakte kya.
Manik:-Kheech sakta ho but not rightnow cauze rightnow my star is eating aur main nahi chahta ki tum dono ki mazzak ki wajah se isse kuch bhi ho.
Nyma:-Hwww...how sweet of u my son in law.
Manan:-Mom we relly missed u so much.Aapki U.S.A. wali campaign se abb apko ko fursat mili hai humse milne ke liye.
Nyma:-Aww...my babies missed me so much.
Nyonika:-Not only them but ur best friend missed u too.
Nyma:-Hey Nyonika how r u now
Nyonika:-M fine but what about my friend.
Nyma:-M also fine but by the Nandini where's ur dad.
Nandini:-Mom dad is at home only doing some importan confrenss calls to some of his doctors.
Cabir:-Finally aunti abb aae.
Dhruv:-Aapke Sambhar aur dose ko bohot miss kiya.
Nyma:-Don't worry aaj shaam ko tum sab ki sambhar aur dosa party pakki.For now u guyz go to ur college with Nyonika till then I take ur leave.
Nandini:-Fine mom tc.
Nyma:-Hmmm beta.
Nyonika:-U all finish ur food now.
Nandini:-Maine aur Dhruv ne toh almost khatm kar li mom but these two slow eaters they have not even finshed even half of their plates.
Manik:-Nans main kha raha hoon but this Cabir I tell u,he is not letting me eat.
Cabir:-Ulta chor kotwaal ko daatein,Nans see..
Nandini:-Shut up u both n eat fast.
(Soon all four of them finished their food n headed towards the car.)
Nyonika:-Dhruv u sit with me at the front seat n Manik,Nandini n Cabir u guyz sit at the back seat 
Manik:-Fine we'll sit at the back seat.
Dhruv:-Yaa I too have no problem.
(Soon all five of them headed towards their destination that is S.P.A.C.E with the car.After about 25minutes they reached the college.All of a sudden hustle bustle started there among the people)
Person1:-Who r they?
Girl:-Its The Nyonika Malhotra.
Person2:-Who r along with her?
Girl:-The one who is sitting at the Front seat is Dhruv Manik's best friend n at the back seat Manik's best friend cum girlfriend Nandini Moorty,Manik's best friend Cabir Dhawan n  last but not the least Manik himself.
Person3:-Now who is this Manik?
Girl:-He is Nyonika Malhotra's son.
(Nyonika ,Dhruv,Cabir n Manan came out of the car.All have them had their most stylish fast track googles.Manik was wearing his brown lofers n blue T-shirt,Nandini was wearing white off shoulder top n denim shorts,Cabir was wearing a simple denim jeans n red colured T-shirt,Dhruv was wearing a black T-shirt n torned denim jeams n Nyonika was wearing a flourel jumpsuit .)
Person3:-Omg Nandini looks so hot.
Girl:-Don't even dare to think like that otherwise next time it will be ur death.
Person3:-Why?
Girl:-Cauze he's damm possesive about her.
Person3:-Do u like Manik too...
Girl:-No no not at all,I mean he is a very good guy but I don't have any soft corner for him.
Person2:-Then whom?
Girl:-Dhruv ,I have great crush on him since my childhood.
Person1:-That means u know them personally 
Girl:-Yaa.
Nandini:-Hey Alya how r u?
Alya:-Hey Nans m fine what about u.
Nandini:-M absolutely fine .
Alya:-By the way meet them they r my newly found friends Nil,Abjay n Manjeet.
Nandini:-Nice meeting u people.
Cabir:-Hey Alya.
Manik:-Long time Alya.
Alya:-Hey whats up all fine.
Manik:-Yaa.
Alya:-By the way wheres Dhruv.
Cabir:-Ahaaa someone is missing Dhruv.
Manik:-Don't worry I'll call him.Buddy...
Dhruv:-Haa buddy 
Manik:-Come see Alya is here.
Dhruv:-Abhi aaya...
Alya:-Hie Dhruv.
Dhruv:-H. ...iee Alya how r u 
Alya:-M fine.
Dhruv:-Main bass abhi aaya.
Manik:-Buddy listen.
Nandini:-Alya don't worry yeh idiot apni feeling jaldi hee confess karega sooner or later.Tumhe toh pata hee hai naa how much shy he is?
Alya:-Hope so.
Manik:-For now hamein classes ke liye chalna chahiye.
Alya:-Yaa.
Nandini:-Oye bandarr chal classes ke liye.
Cabir:-Kya yaar Nans thori der aur sone deti tujhe acche se pata hai naa I hate such boring classes.
Nandini:-Tu chal raha ya ek chpper lagaaun tujhe.
Cabir:-Accha accha utth raha hoon .
Manik:-Nans tu isse aise hee utthaya kar tabhi yeh sudhrega.
Cabir:-Accha toh thori der pehle Nans seh daant kon sun raha tha.
Nandini:-Guyz enough of ur chatting now please lets leave for the classes.

Phewww finally second part update kar diya guyz now its up to u how u take it.
Writer:-
Sandhirrocks akka Diksha.



Edited by Sandhirrocks - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
loved it 
next part soon 
Posted: 8 years ago
Part 3:-
Manik :- Shhh... chup kar Cabir marwayga...
Nandini :- Cabir n Manik chalo I said... n Dhruv what ur doing there chalo we r getting late. 
Dhruv :- Ok chal Nans...
Manbir :- Ya chal...
(All of them along with Alya n others went away for their first class . It was basically a class in which theoritical knowledge about Music )
Professor :-Good Morning students...
All:-Morning Professor. 
Professor :-Take ur seats everyone. So I'll not take much of ur time n I'll introduce myself to all of you; I'm Professor Bakshi ur new teacher for  Musical theories. I know u guys must not be liking those boring musical lectures so to keep sticked to music I'll teach u playfully. 
Nandini :- Professor u mean to say without even seeing also we can learn it. 
Bakshee :-Yes ur right cause music is something which u need to feel it not learn. If u can feel music then only u'll be able to excell in that. So now I 'll ask u guys a question can u play any instrument while u'r blind folded? 
Cabir :- Sir but that's impossible. ...
Bakshee :-No it isn't dear ... Nandini what do you think? 
Nandini :- It's possible Sir cause as now only said we need to feel the music. 
Bakshee :- N u Mr. Manik Malhotra...
Manik :- Yes we can cause music is bond of any obstacles .
Bakshee :- M very impressed from both of u. 
Manan :-Thanks Professor Bakshi. 
(In a hurry someone knocked on the door)
Girl :-May I come in Sir...
Bakshee :-Is this the time to come...
Girl :-M sorry Professor but my flight was 2 hrs late n I directly came from there only...
Bakshi :- Fine take ur seat fast Miss...
Cabir :- Navya Naveli Sir. 
Bakshi :-  Miss Navya take ur seats. 
(Navya took the sat between Cabini)
Navya :-  (whisper)Hey guys.
All 4:- Hie...
(Professor again started the class n all got engrossed in it as the class was very intresting n soon after good 1 hr the class got over all headed towards the canteen for some fun)
Manik :- So "The Navya Naveli" is back haa .
Navya :- Yes indeed I'm  but anyways chuk that n tell me what kind of fun u guys were having today in the morning. 
Manik :- Kisne bataya...
Nandini :- Aur kon Manik it must be Cabir. 
Cabir :- Navya yeh tune kya kiya abb yeh dono mujhe kaccha chala jaenge.
Navya :- Let them. 
Cabir :- Navya tu aise kaise kar sakte ho. 
Dhruv :- Jaisa karega na waisa hee fal milega balak.
Alya :- Guys u all carry on I have to report too the administration office for some paperwork.
Manik :- Yeh sure...
(Rest of the lectures for the day was cancelled so they headed towards Nandini's place)
Nandini :- Hmm... God mom is making sambhar n dosa... yeah...
Cabir :- Oye madam pehle main khaunga...
Nandini :- No pehle main lungi...
Manik :- Mom mujhe pehle dengi I know that. 
Navya :- Tum sab ko pata na but Naima mom will only give me dosa n sambar first. 
Nandini :- No me...
Manik :- No me...
Cabir :- No me...
Navya :- No me..
Dhruv :-  Shut up tum me se kisi ko pehle nahi milegi mujhe milega.
(Naima came with sambhal n dosa along with the servant )
Naima :- Kya baat aaj meri iss dish ki wajah se world war -3 kyon ho rahi hai...
Nandini :- Mom jaldi dona aap bahot bookh lagi...
 see the rats r playing hide n seek in ur babies chotta sa tummy. 
Naima :-Aww my princess..
Manik :- U r so cute Nans. 
Nandini :- Manik stop it na (blushing )
Cabir :- Nans easy otherwise tera face pura red ho jaega. 
Nandini :- ( blushing ) Shut up Cabir...
( Manik was just adoring her cute antics. Soon Naima started serving sambhar n dosa to everyone. )
Naima :- By the way where's Alya she told me she would come. 
Alya :- M here aunty...
Naima :- Sit beta I'll serve. 
Alya :-  Sure aunty... but u too have to eat with me.
Naima :- Ofcourse...
(All started eating their food but our Manan n Cavya were stairing at each other. )
Manik :- Mom this was very tasty thanx once again. 
Naima :- Mom bhi bolta hai aur thanx bhi. 
Manik :- Ok aage se bikul nahi hoga Nandini promise. 
Nandini :- Mom aapne toh apni beti ko hee side kar diya not fare hmh. 

Precap :-  Soha Khurana trying to come close to Nandini's Manik. 

So guys this is the next part of my work.  I know m very late... almost it's been 4 months but still m sorry  for that. Hope u guys spare me...
Posted: 8 years ago
I read all your parts awesome con soon

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