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AlZia SS "Andekhi mohobbat" Part 5 pg 6 (Page 4)

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It was getting dark so Altunia decided to stop somehwere  and conincidently they arrived at the same motel they had  stayed earlier, the receptionist smiled.

Receptionist; kamal he miyan, tum wapas bhi agaye aur is  dafa doosri khatoon k saath? 

Altunia made a face, Razia smiled.

Altunia; ama andhe ho kya tum, khatoon wahi he bas ab  libaas badal gya he, wo kya he na, hum dono ne niqaah  krliya to ab nayi naveli dulhan shauhar se pehle kisi ko  apna chehra kese dikhayegi 

Razia rolled her eyes, "khud ko dikhai nhi deta aur dusron  ka mazaq bna rhe hen" she thought

Receptionist; ab miyan tum niqaah kr k aaye hot to tumhen  acha kamra to dena hi hoga

They were provided with a good room but with a single  bed

Altunia; humne jhoot keh diya, hum yahan zameen pe  sojayenge aap palang pe aaram farmaiye, aap ka parda,  hum udhar mun kr k rakhenge aapki taraf nahi dekhenge  aap parda utar k aram se sojaiye

Razia; nahi koi baat nhi humen parde me neend ajayegi

Razia lay on the bed and stared at him, he was soon  asleep.

Razia smiled , she recalled the moments they spent in this  same motel. 

"kitni ajeeb si kaifiyat he mirza, hum aapke saath hen par  kitni dooriyan hen darmiyaan, par ye dooriyan zaruri hen,  ta k hum jaan sken aapke dil ka haal" she thought.

In the morning when she woke up she saw him setting the  breakfast

"are shehzadi aap jaag gai, jaldi se ja k gusal kr lijiye,  yahan hamam ka intizam to ho nhi paya pr gusul khana  bilkul saaf he aap jaiye, tab tak hum nashte k liye dastar  khwan lagate hen" he said with a smile

She nodded, she returned after the bath and sat down.

"ye sab aapne banaya he?" she asked trying to sound  curious

"jee humne banaya hai, nacheez k haath ka zaiqa chakh k  bataiye kesa laga" he gave her some food, she hesitated

Altunia; hum bhi na, hum uthar mun kr lete hen aap  itminaan se kha lijiye, aapke parde ka ehtaram krte hen  hum.

Razia took a jalebi and smiled, she recalled their almost  kiss and blushed bad.

Razia; jalebiyan boht umda banni hen

Altunia; aapko bhi jalebiyan pasand hen? hamari mohtarma  ko bhi bht pasand thi, wo to esi deewani hui thi hamari  jalebiyon ki k hamen tak haath na lagane de rhi thi,  baantna to unhe ata hi na tha, bas jo unka he wo bas unka  he

Razia smiled, yes she could never share any of her  belongings, and when it came to him, she could never even  share a jalebi that he made with any1 not even with him.

Razia; ab chalen?

Altunia; haan chaliye mohtarma

Razia; jee?

Altunia; mera matlab shehzaadi

They left the motel and got back on their horse.

Altunia; wo mohtarma, pta he aapko, mard ban k hamare  saath kafile me ghus gai thi, ajeeb harqaten thi unki

he kept on telling her stories of his journey with  mohtarma.

Razia; aapki baaton se lagta he k aapke dil k bht qareeb he  wo mohtarma

Altunia; qareeb? wo to hamare dil ka ek hissa hen

Razia blushed. Suddenly their was an attack on them but  the arrow missed them.

Altunia; budhe k sipahi phir agaye

He got off the the horse and started fighting

Soldier; chod de shehzadi ko namuraad, ye Sultan Yaldoz  ki hone wali malika he

Altunia's eyes went red with anger, he fumed and punched  the soldier hard.

Altunia; shehzadi sirf hamare dil ki malika hen samjhe,  kisine unki taraf aankh bhi utha k dekha to ankhen niqal  dega ye deewana

He fought with them all and they ran away

Soldier; bhago miyan ye deewana waqai hum sbko ek  jhatke me maar dalega, Sultan ko dusri malika miljayegi pr  hamari biwaiyon ko dusra shauhar nhi milega

Razia stood shocked, "dil ki malika" the words rang in her  ears, Altunia came to her and grabbed her shoulders

Altunia; aap theek to hain na shehzadi

Razia looked into his eyes

Razia; aapne abhi kya kaha? hum..hum aapke dil ki malika  hen?

Altunia smiled

Altunia; haan shehzadi, hum to tab hi apna dil haar bethe  the jab humne aapko dargah main pehli baar dekha tha

Razia; agar aapke dil ki malika hum hen..to mohtarma kis  dil ka hissa hen?

Altunia was shocked at her words...

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Soldier; bhago miyan ye deewana waqai hum sbko ek  jhatke me maar dalega, Sultan ko dusri malika miljayegi pr  hamari biwaiyon ko dusra shauhar nhi milega
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This update was AFSAW till infinity.Clap And Razia's last sentence was completely apt.Now he has to choose between Mohatarma and Shehzaadi
Iss update ko mila 11/10.ClapClap

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Originally posted by Astoria

Soldier; bhago miyan ye deewana waqai hum sbko ek  jhatke me maar dalega, Sultan ko dusri malika miljayegi pr  hamari biwaiyon ko dusra shauhar nhi milega
ROFL

This update was AFSAW till infinity.Clap And Razia's last sentence was completely apt.Now he has to choose between Mohatarma and Shehzaadi
Iss update ko mila 11/10.ClapClap
ash Hug u can't expect what would happen nextEvil Smile
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Posted: 15 June 2015 at 9:27am | IP Logged
God how can i forget about that motel...LOL... receptionist see jhooth kahe diya...and subha mein breakfast... aye haye.. bara hii cute hain apna mirza...Embarrassed... kash humein bhi aisa koi mil jayein..Day Dreaming
chor yaar riu...Confused... sab ki murad thorri hii naa poori hoti hain...
ab apni dukhbhari kahani koo bazoo mein rakhte huyin update pe dhyan de...LOL

i agree with ash... the soldier part was best and hilarioua... they are r8... budha can have so many mallikas but their biwiyan can't have more sauharsLOL

and last scene... wowEmbarrassed, razo was so r8... abtoo bechara mirza mahotarma aurr shehzadi ke beach mein sandwitch ban jayega!!LOL

wonderful blockbuster update as usual...Tongue

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Posted: 15 June 2015 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Sonu aap ki sense of humour toh kamal ka hain Clap
Mujhe bhi Ash aur Ria ki tarah woh soldier ka dialogue pe bahut haasi aayi.LOL

Mirza toh aapne dil ki do hissen toh nahin kar baithe..ek shehzaadi ke hogaya aur ek mohtarma ke liye.Tongue Banda confusion mein phas gaya. 

Waise your fic makes me miss AlZia carefree days when she was just his mohtarma.Day Dreaming Mirza ko bhi har cheez mein Mohtarma hi yaad aati hain. So cute.

Awesome and very fun and witty update. Continue soon.Big smile


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Originally posted by ifians

God how can i forget about that motel...LOL... receptionist see jhooth kahe diya...and subha mein breakfast... aye haye.. bara hii cute hain apna mirza...Embarrassed... kash humein bhi aisa koi mil jayein..Day Dreaming
chor yaar riu...Confused... sab ki murad thorri hii naa poori hoti hain...
ab apni dukhbhari kahani koo bazoo mein rakhte huyin update pe dhyan de...LOL

i agree with ash... the soldier part was best and hilarioua... they are r8... budha can have so many mallikas but their biwiyan can't have more sauharsLOL

and last scene... wowEmbarrassed, razo was so r8... abtoo bechara mirza mahotarma aurr shehzadi ke beach mein sandwitch ban jayega!!LOL

wonderful blockbuster update as usual...Tongue
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Posted: 27 June 2015 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bhabhijaan

Sonu aap ki sense of humour toh kamal ka hain Clap
Mujhe bhi Ash aur Ria ki tarah woh soldier ka dialogue pe bahut haasi aayi.LOL

Mirza toh aapne dil ki do hissen toh nahin kar baithe..ek shehzaadi ke hogaya aur ek mohtarma ke liye.Tongue Banda confusion mein phas gaya. 

Waise your fic makes me miss AlZia carefree days when she was just his mohtarma.Day Dreaming Mirza ko bhi har cheez mein Mohtarma hi yaad aati hain. So cute.

Awesome and very fun and witty update. Continue soon.Big smile
thank BJ LOL
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