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SwaRon OS: Carrying The Weight (Page 4)

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:06am | IP Logged
First of all amazing Banner Clap, Intense one...
@ psychobaiko. Great work dear...


Goosshhh
Nishii this is amazing...Clap
i never used to read loudly, i always read in my mind but for the first time i read it loudly gosh,,,it made such an impact on me ... awesome writing... appreciating use of words...i was reliving those scene which took my heart that day and today ur this work did...it made me to realize how deeply swaron effect us on our life...
I miss themCry... I never thought this form swayam's side...they showed as sharon's feelings but from swayam its brilliant...
i love the part most where swayam's feeling..the start...that was very well written...Thumbs Up...
Amazing Clap


~Keechu


Edited by --Keechu-- - 16 May 2015 at 8:53am

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Posted: 12 May 2015 at 9:07am | IP Logged
wow...amazing piece of work
i really enjoy reading sad one shots...dnt know why bt i do
n everytym i read one such os...my interest grows further n when the os is written by you...its like a cherry on the cake
loved it :)
beautifully described emotions
this tym more than swayams pov i liked sharon's pov
all in all...it was a gr8 os
keep writing more
n thanks fr d pm :)

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P.s- I adore the BannerHeart

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Posted: 16 May 2015 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Edited above Embarrassed

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Posted: 04 June 2015 at 8:19am | IP Logged
iam missin swaron more after reading this..
reminded me of the old days.
i can't handle the cold swayam..
and sharon ouch..her ego hurts..
it pains to see her..i feel pitied..
swayam's words were harsh..
she's realised her mistake
abnd determined to get him back..
that soothes...
thnx for the pm
keep writing nish...



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Posted: 19 June 2015 at 9:32am | IP Logged
awesome os
loved it 

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Posted: 01 August 2015 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
This is how I had imagined this scene to be in fact we all had.
Sharon's determination to win her love back would have been an altogether different angel and it would prove that Sharon was worth all the love and the struggle Swayam made.
Both of their perspectives are beautifully incorporated  ClapClap Congratulations and well done girl.
It was a brilliant piece of work. Smile

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