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SwaRon OS: Carrying The Weight (Page 3)

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 3:57am | IP Logged

 awesome..ClapThumbs Up

U described that scene sooo beautifully..totally loved it

After reading this missing d3 nd  swaron more..Cry missing vrushan

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 6:46am | IP Logged
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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Brilliance. Absolute, sheer brilliance. 
You are one writer who is capable of making the reader laugh her wits out or almost burst in to tears. You do understand that in other words I imply that you create such a brutal connect with the characters, that the reader cannot but help feeling the same way. Genius, absolute, utter, sheer genius. 

This track in the show was one of my favorites. It was the struggle from the other side to let their relationship to breathe. To bring it back to normalcy. And you scribbled it with such diction, I absolutely, completely loved it. 

Keep Writing more Nishi. 
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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 10:04am | IP Logged
I don't know what to say.. You bought back picture of whole sceneiro.. I miss my SwaRon Cry
Well written as always Thumbs Up
Loved both povs..

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
just love swayam's pov
wow what a walk down the memory lane
 the Sharon Rai Prakash and the Swayam ShekhawatThumbs Up

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
As usual amazing piece of writing:)
It was very well penned :)
#RefreshedMemories ^____^

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Nishi, this was Sheer awesomeness. Brilliant writeup, again. I am actually very delighted with your Oneshots these days. Memories. Sweet and Bitter, you brink them back.
This particular track was immensely intense. Swayam being the rock hard, cold person who was badly broken after Sharon's denial of their relationship infront of their friends. His life had collapsed, tumbled down and he wished to dissapear from the world there and then.
I absolutely loved Swayam's POV. I actually feel you write his side of story in a unique way of perfection. Beautifully penned. I am always on Swayam's side, whatever the case may be :)

Yes now you actually know how to keep your readers hooked. The way you connect to both the characters in the show is Brilliance. Such Genius use of diction depicting the agony both of them were going through, Brilliance. Absolute one.
Keep writing.
-Ayushi

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