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#2~||Akdha SS||~~Woh Bhuli Daastan~~||Important note pg 106 (19/8) (Page 78)

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Posted: 27 August 2015 at 12:49am | IP Logged
Brilliantly writtenClapClap
Emotional and amazing update dearBig smile
Actually,I didn't find this story interesting in the beginning.
But, now I feel there is a lot of improvement in ur writing and the story is very interesting nowStar
Jo still loves or at least cares for JalalHeart but she is afraid to trust him again,her fear is justified.
Jalal has been cheated terribly by his so called friend Angryand is guilt ridden for his treatment towards his JodhaCry
Glad that Salim is fineBig smileThe best part is he called Jo as Maa,how did he recognise?Confused
Wish Jalal gets well soon.
Moti is a loving and true friendSmile
As Moti said,Jalal would have tough time in gaining the trust backOuch,hope he gets successful in the missionBig smile.May be Jo comprises for Salim as of now.Don't know what ur palns areEmbarrassed
This update isn't short,don't worryBig smile
Waiting for the next part.Update ASAP and thnx for the pmSmile

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Posted: 27 August 2015 at 12:58am | IP Logged
[QUOTE=Bindu_nhbr]Brilliantly writtenClapClap
Emotional and amazing update dearBig smile
Thank u Bindu Big smile
Actually,I didn't find this story interesting in the beginning.
But, now I feel there is a lot of improvement in ur writing and the story is very interesting nowStar
Thanks dearEmbarrassed
Jo still loves or at least cares for JalalHeart but she is afraid to trust him again,her fear is justified.
Jalal has been cheated terribly by his so called friend Angryand is guilt ridden for his treatment towards his JodhaCry
Yeah..
Glad that Salim is fineBig smileThe best part is he called Jo as Maa,how did he recognise?Confused
Wish Jalal gets well soon.
About Salim... That's a surprise which will get unravelled soonBig smileStar
About Jalal... What if there's another surpriseStarEmbarrassed
Moti is a loving and true friendSmile
As Moti said,Jalal would have tough time in gaining the trust backOuch,hope he gets successful in the missionBig smile.May be Jo comprises for Salim as of now.Don't know what ur palns areEmbarrassed
Yeah.. Jalal will surely gain success but he has a long distance to goWink
This update isn't short,don't worryBig smile
Really!!!EmbarrassedBig smile
Waiting for the next part.Update ASAP and thnx for the pmSmile
Will try to do that soon... Welcome dearBig smileSmile
@Blue

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Posted: 27 August 2015 at 1:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pretty_me

[QUOTE=Bindu_nhbr]Brilliantly writtenClapClap
Emotional and amazing update dearBig smile
Thank u Bindu Big smile
Actually,I didn't find this story interesting in the beginning.
But, now I feel there is a lot of improvement in ur writing and the story is very interesting nowStar
Thanks dearEmbarrassed
Jo still loves or at least cares for JalalHeart but she is afraid to trust him again,her fear is justified.
Jalal has been cheated terribly by his so called friend Angryand is guilt ridden for his treatment towards his JodhaCry
Yeah..
Glad that Salim is fineBig smileThe best part is he called Jo as Maa,how did he recognise?Confused
Wish Jalal gets well soon.
About Salim... That's a surprise which will get unravelled soonBig smileStar
About Jalal... What if there's another surpriseStarEmbarrassed
Moti is a loving and true friendSmile
As Moti said,Jalal would have tough time in gaining the trust backOuch,hope he gets successful in the missionBig smile.May be Jo comprises for Salim as of now.Don't know what ur palns areEmbarrassed
Yeah.. Jalal will surely gain success but he has a long distance to goWink
This update isn't short,don't worryBig smile
Really!!!EmbarrassedBig smile
Waiting for the next part.Update ASAP and thnx for the pmSmile
Will try to do that soon... Welcome dearBig smileSmile

@Blue
I wish the surprises are sweet and pleasantSmile
WaitingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

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Posted: 27 August 2015 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Unres Big smile
Di Heart sorry I'm late...
Di previous two chapter were mind blowing...amazing...fantastic Thumbs Up
Specially chapter 10 Clap...best chapter tha
Continue soon diStar Heart


Edited by ....Shefa.... - 31 August 2015 at 10:09pm

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Posted: 27 August 2015 at 1:29am | IP Logged
Superb update Barnali Clap
Fnally after a long time Salim is back to his senses.
Poor jalal ,he is betrayed by own friend :-( u have written jalal's breakdown beautifully.
Wow Salim called her maa ?? Has jalal told him anything about her before ?confused but really happy for Jo .
Now what next??
How will jalal ask Jo to forgive him??
Now I'm waiting for next update
Pls sona update asap
Thanks for pm:-) :-)

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Posted: 27 August 2015 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Shefa...

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pls unres soon.. u know what your comment means for meSmileEmbarrassed

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Posted: 27 August 2015 at 1:33am | IP Logged
Superb update Barnali Clap
Thank you diiiBig smile
Fnally after a long time Salim is back to his senses.
YeahSmile
Poor jalal ,he is betrayed by own friend :-( u have written jalal's breakdown beautifully.
Wow Salim called her maa ?? Has jalal told him anything about her before ?confused but really happy for Jo .
Surprise.. SurpriseStarBig smile
Now what next??
How will jalal ask Jo to forgive him??
Read the upcoming updates for thatBig smileLOL
Now I'm waiting for next update
Pls sona update asap
Thanks for pm:-) :-)
Will surely try to update soon diEmbarrassed
U r most welcomeSmile
@Blue

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Posted: 27 August 2015 at 1:49am | IP Logged
superb chappy .you very well pain down their emotion  last time you wrote ja's feeling after truth come in front of him and now jo's feeling .she says she wants to burn with him . in this one line jo pour her heart and accept her self what she want . beautifully written dear. she will not give in so fast and ja have a long way to go. waiting for surprises.

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