Originally posted by: shreya_32it was great...reading nd picturing those emotions that r nt yet shown in d show is a treat yar.plz do cont nd pm me wen u do
Originally posted by: shreya_32it was great...reading nd picturing those emotions that r nt yet shown in d show is a treat yar.plz do cont nd pm me wen u do
Originally posted by: zakterI loved it . Please continue and pm me π
Originally posted by: shreya_rcohh ! this one is real good !
Originally posted by: rajanigandha26Aeesome Ana. As always I fall in love with your os.I would ce certainly want to read sbout possessive dide of Kabir. Its not there in the show so far. We have only seen little jealous and disappointed Ananya. She is not comfortable with his link ups with Malvika or Tarini.
Ananyas pov is so clear and transparent but kabir is still a mystery.Please continue. Cant wait for the story to begin.Thank u so much for this lovely piece of writting.
Originally posted by: Pihu.k11I see som real good stuff here π do notify me plz when u update next π
Originally posted by: krazykajulovely.
it was so awsome.
plz do continue.
Originally posted by: pink_pumpkinWow it was too beautiful the way u described Ananya was perfect.Kabir's jealously ahhh so good
Thanks for writing :)
Originally posted by: sonyjknumWow amazing start well we have seen a glimpse of a little bit possessive Ananya and would love to see possessive Kabir and with RK in mind it will be fantastic read
I have enjoyed your work in ktlk forum a lot
Originally posted by: Maria_TRA lovely OS, dear.. Really would love to see such a possessive side of Kabir for his Miss. Kashyap.. Do continue.. This KaYa invaded heart craves to read more of it..π³π
Originally posted by: Sanya..25Great
Loved it with core...
Continue sooon
Originally posted by: Diksha_1991Superb..Loved it π Pls continue soon. Thanks for the pm rajanij. π€
Originally posted by: --Janvie--Even though I love KaYa alot,I haven't started reading any stuff on them yet,But you pulled me in as I knew its gonna be Awesome being written by you.!!π
Beautifully written Ana...Pls continue this and I loved this possesive Kabir...β€οΈHope We get one soon on the show as well.!! π π³
Originally posted by: bawaswiftAwesome start Ana... βοΈπ
Loved to read Kabir n Ananya's mind n heart through their own words.. ! Its great to have an OS with the same emotional facet when we all are living the life of Kaya now.. π³ Very fine narration.. !!!Will be waiting to know more how Kabir wud get the situation right for Ananya as he has put her in with his own anger.. !Thanks for this superb narration dear.. Plzz do continue.. ! Waiting eagerly.. π
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