This was more than beautiful...so much passion and intensity in one story? ??? I am still on high after reading this...I sooo loved kabir in this fic...he is so desirable as it is and when he goes this possessive and intense he is oh so yummmyyy...I wish we get to see a kabir like this with similar dialogues in the show too even if only for one scene. ...omggg I'll die of happiness. ...
I loved your way of writing. ..so clean and precise. .all the emotions were portrayed so beautifully. ...I am a fan of your now...
And I am still In dreamland after kabir's last dialogue that he wants to claim his right as soon as possible. ...hehehe...totally in love now...
Pls pls continue writing on KaYa. ...I would love to read so much more from u...
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