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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Hey ma belle Shalini, 
Tomorrow is Friday here. What about over there? It's raining here. Aap ko bata hai, don't you think that in such a beautiful rainy spring day, a very beautiful and promising update would be a great idea? Just asking! Embarrassed

Ps. I have to go to bed now. 

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 3:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shalini.ranjan

Originally posted by tuli_jayee

It's an amazingly awesomeee update. Well, I never ever thought that you would ever dedicate an entire update to me. Well, I am highly honoured. Thank you.
Well, about the update, I already mentioned it to be a superb one. This update answers many of our questions & finally we got to see what happened on their first meeting. 

But, I have a question - Khushi accidentally landed herself in ASR's bedroom in a drunken state. It was her first meeting with ASR. She never met him before, then how come she comapared herself with Lavanya & why ? & why did Arnav felt the need to assure her that there was no comparison?
Moreover how come Lavanya remember Khushi? they met 5 years before. Do we really remember all the persons whom we met 5 yrs before & that too for 1 time only ????

But, overall it's a very nice update. Hope you would answer my queries.

Hey Jayeeta...well the honor is mine Smile 

The flashback starts in Chapter 10 (where Arshi had a dinner date), and there Khushi thinks back to the day of Payal's marriage...so it was exactly how it had happened on the show episode 1. So Khushi's first meeting with Arnav was when she was mistaken for being a model and she fell in Arnav's arms...did you miss that chapter by any chance? am not sure...did you?

Coming to Lavanya...she has turned into an interesting character now...isnt it? LOL
I foresee that the next update should throw light on your confusions...

Hey Shalini, no yaar I have'nt missed any of your chapter. Still, since, you mentioned, I again went back to previous chapters & read it once again. May be I haven't make my question clear.

It's just that - I remember Khushi visited Sheesh Mahal on day of Payal's marriage, there she was mistaken as a model & Lavanya handed her a glass of orange juice & pushed her to the stage. There , she accidentally fell into Arnav's arms. Later in the same evening she lost her way in Sheesh Mahal  & was searching back for Lavanya to find her way, where she accidentally ended up in Arnav's bedroom - now tell me whether I got it right or did I miss something???

Now, after ending up in Arnav's room, when she was feeling a little dizzy & emotional, she told the entire truth about Payal's marriage. Here comes my question that , all of a sudden why Khushi compared herself with Lavanya & why did Arnav need to assure her that she is a friend & that there is no comparison. 

Whatever happened between Arshi on that night, many things are responsible for that. Khushi getting lost, then being dizzy & emotional, Arnav comforting her, absence of light making Khushi more scared, Arnav's further reassurances, alchoholic effect - the list goes on . But before that, why Khushi felt insecure of never being able to match up with Lavanya?  Why? I mean till that time, finding Abhishek & talking to him about Payal & his wedding was a priority, for that reason searching Lavanya is also required. Then suddenly, why she everything went in a different direction when she met Arnav & felt insecure all of a sudden???

When it was dark, every tension finally took a toll on her which made her surrender to Arnav. But before that, her behaviour appeared to be strange. 

Don't know , whether , I am able to make my point clear. 

Another thing, I have watched plenty of people who for the first time when tried alcohol, may felt dizzy, but never gets out of their senses like Khushi. So, that part also put me in doubt.

As for Lavanya's part , will be waiting for next update
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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 3:57am | IP Logged
It was really a beautiful update 
So finally Arnav is getting his memory of his past with Khuhsi 
And soon he is going to know everything which included His baby's identity to
Want to know what will Arnav do after knowing the truth 
And how will he win Khushi's heart 

I'm shocked about what Lavanya was doing that night 
So now Anjali know about Khuhsi's divorce case 
Want to know will she able to agree Arnav and Khushi for the trip
Really loved the whole update too much
Waiting for next update eagerly 



Edited by star_fan1 - 15 May 2015 at 4:02am
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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Amazing Update Dear!!!
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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by BarunFan1212

Hi Shalini,
 
I'm sorry for not commenting on your last few chapters of the story. I've been caught up with some dead lines at work. But I do not miss to read any of my favourite stories as its the only one keeps me sane from my crazy busy life. 
 
TAU-R is one of my favourite story and its becoming very interesting from the time Arnav started pursuing Khushi. I'm so anxious to know how the paternity of Nikhil is going to be revealed.
 
Will Arnav will be shocked? He is already like Nikhil a lot and have a soft corner for Khushi. So it may turn out to be a good interesting love story if only Khushi will forgive him for the past deeds (which I feel is not his fault as she was a will participant of it. Am I right?) May be he forgot what happened or couldn't remember her face.
 
Anxiously waiting to the future updates.
 
Thanks for all your PMs
 
God Bless you.

Hey dear...thank you...well to be honest, TAU is one of my favorites fiction as well...<giving you a mean smile Wink)

yes you are right...waise, how do you get things so easily and exactly...Big smile

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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shalini.ranjan

Originally posted by Desire6

U know ..after reading last line ...i am literally craving to read more...
4k kya ..even 10 k words b mujhe kam lagenge...
Ouch
Bt hats of dear...inspite of ur busy schedule ...u wrote such an awesome update..
i can understand how one gets drained after we reach home from work..take my eg...how lazy am to type a comment also...
Tongue

love both ur stories...nd i really really
...Wish it was a book u had written nd i would have read d same in a go wit no stop...
sachi ..if ever u  plan to write a book ...i ll b d first one to grab it...PROMISE
Embarrassed
u should ...u r an awesome writer...

commin to update...

Finally !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Clap wat an update yaar...worth waitn n cribbin on mystery suspense...
Dasu bang on part..Maha update in all sense..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anjali here is so sweet natured i jus love how she was trying to make khushi agree for the trip...
nd dis to cutiepie...hehehheh!!!!!!!!!!! adore dem ..sweet piess.. nik n appu
always bring smile wit der talks..
so...anjali ..knows many thing about Khushi...Thanks to BBC news..LOL
who i felt like
was waitn to burst out her mind heart... nd blurted everythin out..
chalo acha hai..


sachmain wen u started d line

Arnav was sound asleep, when he heard a loud noise from nearby.

i thought like it may b appu n nik must have come wit  some prank ...never thought it was past ..
again loved past n present transitiion
Embarrassed
So lemme assume dat he too was also not in sense on dat deed night and wen Khushi..
came to him out of nowhere..
it was only a bliss like a sweet dream...
and aftermath rememebered only dose eyes whch was haunting him for years..

i jus loved der cute words exchanged on dat night..it was so cute ..felt like so much of love no was already jealous...khushi ka one line yyaar...
.


"You mean I could never match up to your smart and independent friend?"
i was like..not bad...abhi say hak jama rahi hai..nd even arnav was,...lolLOLLOLLOL
explaining her ... dat La is jus a friend...

okay i hav a doubt...wat was dat la thinking ..dat dey shared a romantic passionate or say had one night stand ...nd i think may be she traped him...
or does dat means dey both are in relation from last 5 years


nd dats d reason y arnav never could remember anythin...of dat nt wit khushi...as la had brainwashed or made him belive dat she was wit him...
so does dat means ..she knows..arnav n khushi was together dat nt????????


bt really reading abt der night of passion it felt so nice..d way it was penned...


But he gave far more than he took, and if it wasn't love, it left Khushi feeling as if she had been loved.

 


dont know how to describe how it feels...to read dis
PURE LOVE IN ALL SENSE...
Embarrassed
Loved Arnav ka dream very much in all sense...
bt now y he wants to c d  CD...may b to confirm..hmmm...chalo acha hai..


Jus loved arnav nd nik..nik jus ...cant seems to leave arnav..n vise versa...

bt seriously wenever Arnav was telling  WAt d ...mujhe appu ki dailogue yaad aarahi thi..
LOL

lavanya  i jus hate her more now...
Angry and hate more of dat crrap...
yeh dono mujhe nahi chahiye
Ouch

Waise...main hamesha bhul jati hu...
to tell Banner is awesome ha...

finally...i ll stop my bak bak..

nd come to my crib,,,,
Please please please ...update next part..soon cant wait to know..how arnav would react to knowing d whole truth nd den face KHushi...
nd most importantly ...am sure..his witty brain will find quicky dat nikhil is his son ..as he hav now calculated d years  5 years nd 3 month...

nd cant wait ..hope ..hope..Anjali will be able to convice ,...Khushi for dat trip..nd kya pata NIkhil ke papa b  i mean Arnav b jooin kar le...trip ...

so am waiitn..
waitin
wiaitn
wiaitn'
Day Dreaming

Day Dreaming

Day Dreaming

Day Dreaming
Day Dreaming


Divya dear...I knew you would understand...but you know, whenever I would have a moment of silence in office (sometimes in the middle of an important meeting too) I would start imagining the next part of this story and also yours and a couple of other readers who keep posting a comment saying 'waiting'...haha...specially with the so many reminders you dropped to me to post the update...so yes, it goes to you!

You have no idea...how much your comment means to me Divya...becoz secretly, I am planning to write a book...targeting this year end to finish it from my side and send it for further editing/publishing/etc...I am confident and positive that it will happen and you saying the same just boosted my morale...so thank you for that!

BBC news...thats so 'lol'...I never thought of it like that!
And you are perfectly right about ASR's state of mind and all ... see am so so glad that you are absorbed in this story as much as me...I am not the only one! Big smile

You are right about most of the things...regarding La's thoughts/actions, I would let the next update clarify...wo kya hai na...things are not so much planned in my head right now...hehe..dont mind haan!

And you think Anjali would be able to convince both Arnav and Khushi for the trip...poor lady..such a big task...then it would be like Raizada+Mathur+Gupta trip and no more a school outing...Big smile

You know I read your comment yesterday night, just before sleeping and I was like wow...Divya has commented...you cant imagine that I slept yesterday with a toothy grin after reading your comment 
Hug



Hey u know i GOt a free time at office today nd thought to chk my mails..nd saw dat u hav left a scrap...nd wen i read abt d line dat u r secretly planning on  writin a  book...i was so excited.. i like literally shouted... SACHIEE!!!!!!!!
YEHHH!!!!!!!!!!!Party..nd my colleague  were like...isey kkya ho gayaROFL
nd my boss was like..aisa kya khazana mila issey mobile ...may..heehhe!!!!!!
now how to tell dem wat i got Embarrassed
so i ll b really waiitn.. ha...!!!Day Dreaming
LL I GET A TEASER...A JHALAK...A PROMO...KUCH TOH OF DAT BOOK..
Ouch
 NO...DONT TEL ME NOW..I LL DEN B CRIBBIN FOR IT...
BT LET ME KNOW WHENEVER ...
IF IT GOES TO PUBLISSHING...


WAISE AAJ FRIDAY HAI...UR UPDATE..DAYLOLLOLLOLLOL HEHEHEH!!!!!!!!!!!
WAITIN FOR BOTH STORIES...
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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Ohmy god.. Finally the awaited update!!
Pls give next update soon...

Thnks for pm
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Posted: 15 May 2015 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
Mindblowing updates
Loved them
Well written
Congrats for the new thread
Thanks for the pm

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