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ArHi FF: Revealed #3 | Link to Thread 4 Pg 1 (Page 97)

twinki IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 12:18pm | IP Logged

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Lovelyday Goldie

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
You know what? You are magic in writing . What I mean is ur writing is sheer magic.. The attention to detail in every line is just too hard not to notice.. Every time I read an update, I feel the scene playing out in my head.. Let me say that I m thoroughly enjoying this version of ipk fully... The airplane scene, the meeting of Anjali family with arshi scene , the dinner scene .. the guest room scene... How do u do that? It's just so meticulously written... One more thing.. This Arnav is just too perfect!! Cannot believe after seeing all the love he has for her, she still wants to leave him...I m glad though that they are fighting their demons together .. Or rather he is helping her fight her demons by being with her, for her ... One more thing I noticed till now is they are so much in love .. Their differences don't seem significant enough to go apart... Unless khushi is depressed for something else.. There don't seem trust issues .. As I said, ur story is so real that it amazes me how involved I get as I read :)...

Fantastic update!!! Clap

Edited by Serene77 - 02 June 2015 at 12:39pm

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swtsam IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
awesomely amazing. ..loved it..

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tina_1234 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Awesome part !!

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ranogill IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
I am little at peace now by reading this update ..khushi thinking in the past tense that her marriage was on the brink made my day... Still lot of work needed.. But they are trying ... Wonderful , awesome story

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Anu567 Goldie

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Is it me...or does every chapter seem a little shorter? Ha, ha...the power of your narrative, my dear. Such a lucid, free flowing chapter...Loved the Arnav and Khushi a conscious and subconscious level...right down to the color coordinated clothes...amazing bonding between Arnav and Anjali, and the children with their uncle and aunt...all too picturesque...all too fraught with emotion for Arnav and Khushi who are unable to help thinking of Pari at every step. Their recalling her when they were up in the clouds was truly heartbreaking. Thank you for making them try to rekindle the romance. Would it even be possible that Khushi and Arnav have a baby again, that will help them sort things I realize, there are no guarantees, but in lives like theirs the baby may be the one thing that could cement things between them. Also given the fact that they both seem such naturally amazing heart bleeds for them. How difficult must it be to be around Lavanya and Aman's kids or Anjali and Karan's and not remember their own predicament. Thankfully do not know too many such couples. Most are either childless out of choice or have made their peace. Do have an aunt who had so many miscarriages- she finally adopted her brother and sister-in-law's third child. While the entire family has made peace with this now, I am often left wondering how things could have been if they had managed to have their own kid...hmm...

Jigs, please let the next few be happy waala updates...bass sahaa nahee jaata...

In case we don't all tell you often enough,thank you for this story...truly masterclass!


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meera06 Goldie

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Great update as always!!
I can see that things are getting a little better in A and k's life ..I guess the much needed vacation is going to bring some changes in their life..

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indhuza Senior Member

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
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