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ArHi FF: Revealed #3 | Link to Thread 4 Pg 1 (Page 91)

Chokri_ASR IF-Rockerz

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Chokri_ASR IF-Rockerz

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Guess the update actually fit in one this time... SIGH

Author's Note:

This is where I leave you today! I hope you enjoyed this update meeting the Mehra family. As always, I look forward to hearing your thoughts, please do let me know what you think whether it be a comment or like.  


It seems last week's poll was very close with few of the options, which actually aligns to the statistical numbers they publish on what one feels after a miscarriage. Below are the results from last week's poll taken by your fellow readers of Revealed:

A new poll has been posted, hoping you will take a quick moment and cast your vote on this week's question.  Some more photos have been added to the Galleria section on the homepage of the blog, including a pictures of the Mehra family, please do check them out. Revealed Blog  CLICK HERE  

Thank you for your understanding, support, encouragement, and most of all patience!  Welcome new readers!


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Love always,


Edited by Chokri_ASR - 02 June 2015 at 10:28am

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chotidesi IF-Dazzler

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Looking out the plane window as it takes off always takes my breath away. There is something magical about looking out over the clouds, seeing the peaks of mountains from above. There was something so beautiful about the moment when she looks out and remembers Pari. It is especially poignant when Arnav pulls her into his arms and places a kiss on top of her head- it's a beautiful image.

I love the little touches you've added to this chapter. For me, this chapter was about the small moments. Arnav opening his arms for Anjali and engulfing her in a hug was heartwarming, just a moment shared between siblings who haven't seen each other in a long time. Or at dinner, when it's just a flow of conversation that happens between families. It's just so natural, so familiar. There are the little glances they share, like when she's holding Bella and their gazes meet. That silent connection they have says so much, and is so intimate- it feels as if you're intruding on a private moment when you read it. I love these moments the most, because you prove that there doesn't have to be something happening all the time. Sometimes, the best moments are the one's where it's just a shared moment of daily life.

Sid is adorable! I just want to pick him up in my arms and drop kisses all over his face and squish him in a hug. I loved his little exchange with Arnav- them imitating each other made me laugh. You can see Arnav and Khushi's love for children- these are their own, and I love how indulgent they are.

But damn it Sid! Couldn't he have waited just a little bit longer to interrupt. That was passion- you do it SO well! And these two haven't ah... given in, in quite some time, have they? Intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai... really meetha

I loved this chapter- for the little moments.

Love you hamesha,

Your Choti.

Edited by chotidesi - 02 June 2015 at 10:56am

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Mirabell Senior Member

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"They say time heals all wounds, but that presumes the source of the grief is finite."

It started with your epigraph this time. And how true.. 

Grief rides alongside for as long as the pain resides inside. 
Pain resides inside as along as memories preside
And what of memories? 
Ephemeral as cloud
Or enduring as scar

No, that is not a poem.. that is the the tone of what you have written this time. There are two streams of consciousness in your chapter - the light, almost whimsical Arnav with a droll-dripping Khushi. The other is the two of them bearing the weight of their scars, burn of their grief. 

How seamlessly you have woven them together. There are many things one should take away from these simultaneous realities. This feels real to me, when sadness resides next to cheer, pain next to yearning.

That you have done it so effortlessly is a mark of your ability as a writer. I am watching you leap across these milestones (arbitrary as they may be) of writing... 

And that pleasure is all mine. Heart 

Edited by Mirabell - 02 June 2015 at 10:16pm

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Arshi67 IF-Rockerz

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Jigs you have the ability to make me feel a whole spectrum of emotions in one update. Just when I was giggling at Khushi's impatience with flying and nodding eagerly at Arnav's needing a haircut, you grabbed my heart with Khushi's melancholia. A deeply moving image of their baby's warmth cocooning them up there in the clouds.  

I was delighted to meet the Mehras, with the younger two being Oh so cute! But that moment when Arnav holds his arms out for his sister made me cry once again. The love they share, as indeed with Khushi, very evident.  I can understand Khushi not wanting to burden Anjali with her problems. But the equation Anjali has with her Bhai and Bhabhi means words are superfluous. She can sense the strain. 

I loved the silent flow of words between Arnav and Khushi - tum kuch na kaho, maine sun liya. There was  something so poignant in seeing him seeing her holding the baby. Especially given what had happened on the plane earlier. You give us these moments that just move me immensely. 

So the cosy bed is going to be shared by Khushi and Sidhu?! Bechara Zio, and bechare hum :( I was looking forward to this flirty Arnav exercising his charms on his wife! But I'm with Arnav here. Seeing Khushi smile and indulge in amused repartee makes it all worthwhile. And now waiting to see if she embraces his "My love anything for you" dil se

Edited by Arshi67 - 03 June 2015 at 7:40am

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ManKiBaath Senior Member

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 9:18am | IP Logged

My super duper apology for Res'ing on first page and letting it slip my mind after that. The only saving grace was in me realizing that there is a certain upside to reading the same chapter after a gap of few days. It is interesting how it does add a new dimension to your earlier version and this time around was no different.

Just like those theme park visits where the talk is always about those big rides which do not last more than a few seconds, only to realize later that the real joy of the trip always rested in those relaxed comfort rides. This was one of those relaxed and comfort chapters which did not make a lot of splash but eased us into a small comfort zone with glimpses of what it can be.     

Why do I get the feeling that u were on the plane when you were writing thisWink. For all the cacophony around, there is always something about being at thirty thousand feet and trying to see the big picture down below. Being in the clouds is always a hazy and turbulent experience. But once you cut through them and reach a level where you can look back(down) upon them, that is when you start realizing that there is a method to all that madness that you just passed through. Arnav and Khushi most definitely have felt the turbulence of losing Ma and Pari but I am slowly getting that hope back that they are reaching that altitude now where they start seeing shapes out of the alignments down below.      

The Mehra's house (including its small bed), seems to be just the right home that Arshi need right now. With all the hugs, embraces and kisses they got, if nothing else, atleast should make them feel warm and comfortable. And, who would not travel a thousand miles if it meant that you could find you "whole hearted laugh" that went missing for a while.      

Finally, I see some of those walls cracking up. It is hopefully not that far where we can see the wall breaking down and I will take it even if it is one brick at a time. Please let the demolition beginCool.

Edited by bhavali4RR - 14 June 2015 at 10:06pm

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canapoem IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Most things break, including hearts. The lessons of life amount not to
wisdom, but to scar tissue and callus.

- Wallace Stegner

Jigs, I dont have words to say how well you describe pain and sorrow. 

Revealed not only reveals the depth of marriage and its hidden gems of wisdom, but as the story is progressing and layer by layer the story is getting peeled, I can see the hidden layers of loss and pain, the beauty of relationships be it friendship or love between siblings, and every update ends up giving me a new revelation and hidden beauty behind it. 

Pain and sorrow - Does the wounds inflicted on our heart and mind due to loss, pain and sorrow ever heal??? what is it about these never healing wounds which keep surfacing raw and fresh, every now and then. Are these really never healing???

Reading about Arnav and Khushi feeling Pari happily running around in the clouds made me think, will this couple's aching hearts ever be soothed?

But if accepting the grief and talking about it is the first step towards healing, then they are on the right path. I hope that they take these steps forward and never look back leading to more heart break.

The second part was all about the beauty of relationships and when how closeness brings about understanding each other's inner turmoils without expressing them.

The Mehras are such a lovable family. The bond shared by Anjali with her brother and bhabhi was indeed a treat to read.

Fell in love with Sidu and Bella. 

Now waiting for the healing to continue. 

Edited by canapoem - 03 June 2015 at 8:44am

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..ri.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 9:27am | IP Logged
superb update...
I feel a little development in their relationship..
loved the way anjali found out there is something wrong..
sid scenes was so cute..

Edited by ..ri.. - 02 June 2015 at 8:50pm

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