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bellacoolio Senior Member

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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
This was so sad! But truly well written! Every word was overflowing with emotions that the characters felt and me as a reader was able to feel the same level of emotions! It was possible only because of your powerful writing Jigs! I salute you for writing pain so beautifully!
I am glad that they both have accepted the death of their child, the pain. I am sure they will be able to move forward together now.

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canapoem IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 6:11pm | IP Logged

He took slow steps, stopping in the middle of the room, right where the cradle used to be. But now it was put away in the closet, probably never to be used.

Jigs, why does he say that the cradle will probably never be used?

Did the doctors say that its hard for Khushi to conceive again? Is there something which Arnav knows and Khushi does not?

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flowers4u IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 6:39pm | IP Logged
a beautiful and emotional update...glad to see them dealing with theirgrief 

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seeta_naips IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 7:15pm | IP Logged
Crap i had a feeling their distance was because of a stillbirth or miscarriage

And i know from experience people grieve in different ways

My brother and sister in law lost their first baby, she was a full term still birth

My sister in law was able to talk to the family and come to terms but my brother bottled it all up 

He became depressed and was unable to function, he started to get panic attacks and chest pains

he consulted with a few doctors and they gave him meds which only made it worse

Eventually my uncle taught him to do yoga meditation which brought him out of the depression without meds and counselling

This happened about 3 1/2 yrs ago now they have a 15 mths old baby boy

He is the main reason my brother and sister in law is happy and able to move on

He is the whole family shining light after our angel left us

Edited by seeta_naips - 27 May 2015 at 7:18pm

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wildandsweet Goldie

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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written!!
I've unfortunately experienced 2 miscarriages before having my children and have gone through delivering one similar to khushi.  You have written this chapter with so much love, and understanding and compassion. It must not have been easy but you did it beautifully.

Thank you 

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inajnar Goldie

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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
I think this chapter was written well. It moved me as a mother and its not very untrue that motherhood is one big guilt trip  . Khushi feeling guilty for her loss  is portrayed v realistically .

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Auchi Goldie

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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM & this really was an emotional update dear. i cried a lot reading it. well hope after this their relationship works out.

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krutti Newbie

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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 12:31am | IP Logged
awww my arnav and khushi CryCryCry
i cried a lot ,very emotional update
this update was beyond amazing i have no words
you brought out their emotions sooo wellClapClap
very well written

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