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ArHi FF: Revealed #3 | Link to Thread 4 Pg 1 (Page 69)

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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
I think this chapter was written well. It moved me as a mother and its not very untrue that motherhood is one big guilt trip  . Khushi feeling guilty for her loss  is portrayed v realistically .

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Auchi Goldie
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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM & this really was an emotional update dear. i cried a lot reading it. well hope after this their relationship works out.

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krutti Newbie
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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 12:31am | IP Logged
awww my arnav and khushi CryCryCry
i cried a lot ,very emotional update
this update was beyond amazing i have no words
you brought out their emotions sooo wellClapClap
very well written

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sunitikapoor IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 1:03am | IP Logged
You are a wonderful writer Jigs...I am really happy to be a part of this story.  I can understand it would be very tough for you to write this update.  The loss of an unborn is really painful...my niece lost her son when she was 5 months pregnant...it took her almost 2 years to come back when she got pregnant again.  It is very sad.   I hope like her Khushi conceives again and their Pari will come back to them.  I cried throughout the chapter.  
Simply hats off to you Jigs. 

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roshaan IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Very painful update but very well written

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hydsri Goldie
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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 2:51am | IP Logged
fainally got to read your update. It was beautiful and very emotional. I do hope now Arnav and Khushi can move forward.

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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Amazing update Tongue very emotional CryCry I hope after this, khushi will think of giving their relation a chance now Smile I am happy that arnav didn't think of going to New YorkBig smile that was one confusion due to which khushi went back into her shell in the party..thanku soo much for the PMs Big smilelooking forward 2 read more Big smile

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sutapasarbabhom IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 28 May 2015 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Hats of u to write this imotional part so butifuly
I cry lot during reading
Its  good that they talk finally
As a mother i can well undrstnd khushi feelings
Butifuly writen

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