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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Despair only yields to more despair or hope. I am glad after 2 years of more despair, you treated us to some ray of hope towards the end of the chapter.
 
Some chapters do not end with the last lines and have a tendency to linger on, looking for closure. Yes, it needs a closure from the impact it left on me. Yes, it needs a closure from the pain you get when someone pinches your heart.
 
Even though I have said it a million times, I am sure, saying it another million times, will not still wear the sheen of your brilliant writing.    
 
I am not sure if you intended it that way but the chills started for me right from the first few lines. The slips in the bathroom, the caution from Arnav - I knew we were in for a rough ride right there. The baby bump talking moments were endearing and I guess that is what makes the loss even more unbearable for Khushi and Arnav.
 
What is that feeling when your dream becomes a sad memory? Is denial an obvious choice when you hear the unthinkable? What is it like to look at the child for closure instead of a beginning? And as you have said what is the feeling of delivering someone who is no more?
 
A lot of questions with very little answers from me. I probably belong to that crowd who would advise to move on. But, I have to admit that reading your portrayal had me thinking. Arnav and Khushi were no different and for all the guilt and blame they were dealing with personally, it was about time they shared some sorrow together.
 
You were right about being nervous with this chapter and I have to commend you for handling a sensitive topic with a lot of sense. As you have so rightly ended, "They had each other to lean on and neither planned to back away, not tonight". We could not have asked for anything more at the end of all that.


Edited by bhavali4RR - 27 May 2015 at 11:42am

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Jigs, what a wonderful writer you are!!! It must have been so tough for you to write this update.

To imagine what the couple must have undergone emotionally must have been so tough to write, yet you nailed it to the core.Clap



One of life's most painful losses is that of an unborn child.  Parents feel a strong and natural love for their unborn child and to lose their little one to death before they ever had a chance at life seems unfair, cruel even. Parents are left to wonder what might have been and a pair of empty arms can seem emptier than ever before. 

I can totally understand Khushi when she said how the consoling words of be it her mom or the doctor or the therapist sounded so artificial to her because no one knew what she was feeling deep down in her heart.

And seeing Arnav hurting so much further pushed her into her own built shell, putting a show outside saying she was fine.

But now is the time to bring those feelings outside. Now is the time to share with her husband her deepest feelings keeping all the pretenses aside. Now is the time to mourn for her baby and hopefully now will be time to get a kind of closure to the tragic chapter in her life. 

I really hope this is a starting step towards working their marriage out.


We don't want to cry anymore
But the pain won't go away
Our hearts are torn in two
Because our baby couldn't stay

We don't want to cry anymore
God had other plans for you
Mommy & Daddy will get thru this someday
But right now our world is blue

We don't want to cry anymore
We never thought we'd be torn apart
Even though we can't hold you in our arms
We will always hold you in our hearts

We don't want to cry anymore
Our Angel, there was nothing we could do
Mommy & Daddy will miss you so much
And never forget, we will always love you


- Anonymous 


Edited by canapoem - 26 May 2015 at 6:15pm

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 10:13am | IP Logged
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it was heart wrenching Jigs,.,...hats off to you for writing it in such a sensible way..no one should go thru such pain..I hope Kushi conceives again and Pari comes back to them


Edited by sman - 26 May 2015 at 12:45pm

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 10:18am | IP Logged
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my heart goes out to all who have lost a child...it's the most difficult loss to bear. Jigs you did a super job of portraying Khushi and arnav's grief, and in such a sensitive manner. hats of to you.
Am glad that finally khushi was able to talk and share her feelings with arnav. it must be such a relief to let it all out after two long years of bottled up emotions. hope they now can move forward and maybe have or adopt a baby. it's your story to tell, i'm just saying. well done my dear, have a wonderful day today. love and hugs.


Edited by anukap - 26 May 2015 at 11:52am

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 10:35am | IP Logged

the first part was really an emotional one.. the loss of a child is a never ending grief to their parents and u put it down so well..

but amidst of all these im happy that they both have decided to mourn for their loss after two years and come out of the guilt and self blame..

its not easy to just forget and move on..yes baby will live forever in their parents heart's..
im glad that it happened and for good..two broken hearts, supporting each other will make the difference.. and im more than happy that khushi is finally allowing arnav to do this for her, for him..to hold her and to be held by her..

thank you for this beautiful update..


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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 10:44am | IP Logged
That was a heart touching update dear
The grief of losing ones baby is not easy to explain but you wrote it beautifully
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 10:48am | IP Logged
This update made me cry

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Lovely update :) sorry for late commenting.. Infact m out of station right now n bit busy..! So i cant give u long comment.. Shoo sorry, plz dnt mind :)

Very heart touching jigs:) my heart aches reading the part of khushi's miscarriage.. At the end of the update, i was crying n i cant help it..! We even cant inagine the pain of those parents who lost their child :( still i felt like after reading.. Full on emotional update n thanks for giving such a nice chapter :) loved it to the core..! Thanks for the pm:)

Edited by Dhrenu - 31 May 2015 at 11:49pm

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