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Dhrenu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Very emotional chapter :/ its really painful to read about khushi's miscarriage :( she should understand that she is not the only one suffering the loss of their child but arnav also feels the same pain..!

Lovely flashback... Khushi told him about her pregnancy... Their moments are just so wonderful.. Loved the positive vibe in their relation earlier.. I loved the whole flashback :)

It good to see that finally khushi decided to talk about her loss, her pain n their marriage... Heart touching update jigs.. :) will wait for next update for you reveal more :) thanks for pm..!!

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Poju Senior Member

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Sad.. Its really sad for any parents to loose thier baby..
They really need to open up to each other.. Don no y khushi bring so difficult.. Jus talk it out and finish.. 

Waiting for ur next teaser n update..

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mu12 Senior Member

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 10:59am | IP Logged
waiting for the next update
i think after that update only this chapter over for me
i thought about it when i saw the teaser ...the loss
she is suffering , he is suffering
for couples some times more than love have to have an open talk with each other , about their sorrow ya happiness..communication hold a great role in  a successful marriage life 

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-Bhavi IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Shocked Forgot its tuesday today JigsEmbarrassed You take a vacation and this is what happensErmm 

Res for chapter 10


Hug For such an emotional update. The storm is brewing up and its about time its unleashed.Clap . Best part of the story they started to speak up and Khushi now knows that Vortex is not donig any business with Wakefield and that he woud never take such a big decision without consulting his wife. Big smile and for the lighter moments to rile up Khushi wasThumbs Up. Khushi giving the khushkhabri to Arnav in her little way wasClap but then as its said - Khushi ko khushi ki nazar lag gayiCry

Patient Arnav and fed up Khushi was the flavor of this update. Khushi is done with everything and anything happening. She can not take it any more. Whatever the reason is they have lost the common ground to connect through words.Ouch Ouch 

We human are so unbelievable. We want to show world that we are strong and we can fight but in reality its other way round. We try to show that we are strong when we need the most support and then blame it on others that they don't understand. We are so freaking confused at times especially at the time of grief but it boggles my mind that Arnav assumed everything was fine and it took him two freaking years to start that conversationShocked ShockedShocked

Yes we have men out there who think they understand their women and then there are people like Arnav who does not go beyond their own griefs and own little world. Not that they are selfish but they fail to understand other's pov and at times we need to spell out each and every term for them. So yes Mr Raizada you screwed up big time  when you thought that Khushi was strong to be out of her grief and does not need her husband to be out of this state emotionallyOuch.

And Jigs seriously you have to stop here.  AngryLOL 

Edited by -Bhavi - 19 May 2015 at 12:19pm

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nizahairu Goldie

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Nice update
Whats there actual problem

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lalarukh IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 11:14am | IP Logged
aweee thats an emotional chapter and very painful too...the past ...his mothesr death...the childhood house sale...and coming back home and finding beautifully decore  room for their baby...with every thing screaming love and arnav  khushi...the childhood pictures...his crib...aweee dear u have written it beautifully...and its painful to see that if khushi is burning in the pain of losing their baby arnav was going throughout the same too..and just for her sake he tried to avoid things which in return created distance its not arnav fault maybe his approach was wrong but he was really there throughout in this pain ...beautiful chapter dear...

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luvbug IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 11:15am | IP Logged
that was a heart wrenching update... very beautifully written...all the emotions are portrayed so beautifully... felt as if i feel wat they r going through... it was me instead of them...
glad at least one misunderstanding is cleared Smile
eagerly waiting for the next!

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vinovember Senior Member

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Clap Clap I'm speechless!! Such an emotional update!! I really have no words to describe how well you have written this update! Arnav finally cleared khushi's thoughts abt him not leaving to New York and working with wakfeild! Phew!! The scene where both of them stand at the door knob of their kids room!! Cry just broke my heart! Both grieving for their child individually! Arnav realising where and how did their relationship reach there! First time your update ended in one post, and I was so unprepared for it! But the update was just too good!! Haye,next Tuesday come soon! Awaiting next update eagerly!! Wink

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