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Hi Jigs,
First my apologies for not commenting on your previous few chapters.
I was too caught up with deadline projects and couldn't find the time to sit and relaxedly type my comments. Even today I felt so guilty that came running to say a few words about the last few chapters.
You are a genius. If I liked Stripped a lot then I'm falling in love with Revealed now. How do you come up with such concepts and weave this story so emotionally and beautifully.
I love the way Arnav made Khushi feel special on that opening ceremony. Love the friendship those 4 friends share. I love the way Khushi stood up to Alicia in the restroom. Loved Arnav's resolved to fix all the issues with her and moving into their bedroom you wrote that part beautifully. Their shopping together and their planned vacation. No words to describe how beautifully you brought those moments. But I loved the part how you portrayed their character with those kids. It made them realize how good they are with kids and what is missing in their relationship.
The last question of Arnav I'm so anxious to see Khushi's response. I have so many questions assumptions of what might have happened two years ago. But I want to wait patiently to see what you are going to reveal to us in the coming chapters.
A brilliant story a must to be read by all married and would be married couples.
Thanks for all your PMs.
God Bless you.
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