Ye Hai Mohabbatein


Ye Hai Mohabbatein
Ye Hai Mohabbatein

Happy Feet

sumiko Goldie

Joined: 17 June 2009
Posts: 1329

Posted: 08 May 2015 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Happy feet 

Coordination between them had gone haywire
Conversation was at the of point of despair
Even their twiggle was out of sink 
And they could at eachother hardly turn or wink
It was indeed a trying ordeal
Long drawn out like an endless reel
One was good the other bad 
But both felt very very sad
The cast was strong and heavy
And one could not on it its weight levy
The other one bore the brunt
Mind you without a sigh or a grunt
Then one day the Dr pronounced 
And to their delight announced
The plaster to be taken off now
But to some exercise promise to bow
Their forced separation had come apart
And once again Divyana's feet were happy to start
To walk without help or crutch
And on the whole feeling better much much 

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OnePiece Goldie

Joined: 16 May 2010
Posts: 2338

Posted: 09 May 2015 at 11:33am | IP Logged
    Sumiko, good work on the suspense. I couldn't get the topic until the very last lines..Thumbs UpClap
   Well written!!

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kanajigokul Senior Member

Joined: 15 September 2011
Posts: 814

Posted: 09 May 2015 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Excellent writingClap
mayasun IF-Rockerz

Joined: 15 January 2015
Posts: 6477

Posted: 09 May 2015 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Hi Sumiko,
Excellent poetry.

Missed it for few days. If you can I have a request can you please write one on Raman confession.


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