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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 97)

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 7:12am | IP Logged
What a beautiful story !!! Read in one go :) .. I loved the way u write.. Those emotions the characters undergo are fabulously written.. Khushi / nk .. What can i say about them.. Nk is an indispensable part of her life.. The emptiness she feels because of his absence.. :( its heartwrenching.. I loved their bond.. I love him.. I truly feel when she thinks of those moments with nk.. Everytime she thinks that she need to do MANY FIRSTS without him.. Fabulous.. It melts my heart.. Manorama.. What can say about her.. She is awesome.. The way she comforts khushi & meera is fabulous.. Her presence really strengthens them.. Meera and mohan are adorable.. Meera's ability to make sure mohan is doing fine is appreciable.. I love nani too.. Arnav & maya's relationship surprises me.. This story is so positive.. Everyone having their trouble... Battling with the help of their loved ones.. Great.. This arnav is gentle , understanding .. He is a dutiful father.. Very cordial with buaji , manorama.. I really love this arnav <3 <3.. khushi is so fortunate to have friends like la, akash.. Their natural bonding is what comforts khushi.. :)

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 7:27am | IP Logged
simply amazing
loved it.

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 7:39am | IP Logged
why he cares so much ?...because he **** her ... he did then and he does now .. I didn't want to say the word ,, I don't know why but to me even it feels kind a strange cuz of her behavior ... didn't want another guilt on her for she thinks that everyone leaves her oneday ...   

and that was just a kiss but what a kiss it was Wink
and I agree with him that she is a widow and he is a divorcee and there is nothing wrong in wanting or doing in what had just happened ... but she is also right in to holding on the memory of her husband ,,, but she needs to learn that she have to allow that memory to be a sweet one and happy one where she can draw strength and move forward from it with it not make that memory a road block in to her life ,...

even if they decide to go ahead with this relationship then there also be maya in their life and house thru out all their life (yes she is married to another person) and she is arnav's friend and he on his own way loves her too she will be right there with him in and out of his life and just like them she had share a child with nk and she still loves him and that love doesn't have to be replace to anything else she can still remember NK and love him talk about him to her daughter while moving forward with arnav ,,,,

I just simply loved the whole part
cant wait to read more as the night gives way to the morning and lots of things would be changed by then I guess ,,,,

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 8:39am | IP Logged
beautiful n sensual update..no vulgarity anywhere !!

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Wonderful chapter 
Arnav - khushi's intimate scenes is written so passionately , it was not vulgar . Their passion is raw which they have banked inside them for over a decade . Khushi couldn't cross the line , she is restraining herself. She is convincing herself that being a widow certain lines should never be crossed . Its time she grabs second chance & live her life to the fullest , it doesn't mean she forget NK ,he will be very much alive in form of Meera . If she lets go off this chance she will end up crying alone when she grows old just like Manorama Ouch 

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 9:56am | IP Logged
awesome update.. beautifully written... loved it Smile

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 10:50am | IP Logged
just awesome... superb!
spectacular...

oh when will she accept him? the wait is too painful

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
simply awesome. ...loved it...to core...

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