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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 95)

saakhi01 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 18 August 2012
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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 12:32am | IP Logged
Awesome update. I guess words won't be enough to describe what I felt while reading this update.
All the hues of different emotions that one can feel was there in this update.

There was passion , love, longing , happiness n then suddenly confusion , guilt , helplessness n indecision, anger , hurt .
It was like arnav n khushi's past n present came together to summarize everything that they must have felt from the day they met in the past n will feel in the future.

Thanks for d pm. I really loved reading this update Smile
It is such a wonderful piece of writing.

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Viji79 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 21 February 2010
Posts: 10266

Posted: 20 June 2015 at 12:43am | IP Logged
Beautiful MB. More than the kiss, more than the progress in ArShi relationship, more than their apprehensions, what stood out to me in this update was Manorama's thoughts.
We come alone, we go alone and all that we gain in between are just sojourns, which to my spiritual mind is only Maya, that which is not ours. How very true. The realization of this single most truth is the solution to all the problems - mental, physical, religious, emotional.

Such rich thoughts. You amaze me. Take a bow girl. 


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shereenjain Senior Member

Joined: 25 May 2012
Posts: 326

Posted: 20 June 2015 at 12:49am | IP Logged
Beautiful chapter Mira.. Emotions were unmasked, and they were all out in the open. There was love, acceptance  and doubt.  I hope Arnav's patience and love will help Khushi overcome her doubts. She will learn that NK is not between them, but will be with them. And she is not going to lose him again. 

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manugan Senior Member

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Awesome update Clap

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SharuAG Senior Member

Joined: 22 October 2014
Posts: 989

Posted: 20 June 2015 at 1:08am | IP Logged
How do I start commenting on this sensitive and intimate chapter?

You started the chapter with such a sweet and caring bond. Two souls founding solace form each other and bonding like sisters. Manoraman'a concern for losing Khushi is so touching and the concern and assurance receive from Madhu is amazing. 

You moved from sisterhood bond to lovers. The transition was beautiful. The intimate scene was beautifully pen down. 

Will Khushi be able to move on with Arnav, while she is still holding too much on NK. Is she feeling that she is still married to NK? Was it the reason for her holding back? Or is she in fear of losing him, like every one she loves leaves her like, she lost her parents and NK? How can one overcome this kind of insecurity? Insecurity which is within oneself is very hard thing to fight? To overcome such insecurities, one had to fight from the core. I hope Khushi would realize how special Arnav is and how Lucky to get the second chance in life is. I wish Manarama and Lav will help to overcome this insecurity. 

You have respected the Muslims in this chapter and I respect you for that. 

Wish you a blessed Ramadhan to all the Muslims, in this forum. 

Until next time, keep penning down amazing words. You left us craving more? 

Edited by SharuAG - 20 June 2015 at 1:12am

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loves_aishu Goldie

Joined: 04 July 2014
Posts: 1289

Posted: 20 June 2015 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Wow, the way you bring out the emotions
those raw, plain, simple emotions
just amazing!!
Brings out those years from deep somewhere inside me!!!
also your sensuous scenes were just enough!!
What they should be, atleast according to me!!!!

Great job!!!
Take Care!!Smile

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just4this Goldie

Joined: 17 September 2012
Posts: 1799

Posted: 20 June 2015 at 1:21am | IP Logged
You r a writer par excellence my dear friend,I am not only thankful to u but also to deepthi who had suggested ur ff.
I fell blessed to read ur work
A heartfelt THANK u that is what I can give back
Thank u

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jisa IF-Rockerz

Joined: 07 June 2012
Posts: 8470

Posted: 20 June 2015 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Loved it...!!!! 

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