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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 85)

1chilly IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 01 December 2012
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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 6:40am | IP Logged
This is just not fair MB.
You give us a HOT teaser and then leave us hanging.
I am not 'contente' at all!
Imagine how my poor ASR must be suffering!Wink

Loved the bit where they bond as parents.
And their hurt and pain when the kids are hurting.
Isn't the bond between a parent and a kid beautiful?
When our child is in pain, it hurts us more.
In fact this happens even when a child who is not our own is in pain.

Lavanya is the bestest!
Loved how she encouraged Khushi to take her life in her own hands and move on.
She absolutely needed this pep talk.
Hopefully this will work in Arnav's favour.( and indirectly ours)Embarrassed

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abby2181 Senior Member

Joined: 10 March 2012
Posts: 348

Posted: 13 June 2015 at 7:29am | IP Logged
One of the best aspects of this story is that Arnav & Khushi's love story - the second time around - is going to be not just about their feelings and acceptance of each other but of their individual histories and current realities - children and extended families.
You took a seemingly normal occurrence for any parent, a child's mishap and made it into a turning point for their relationship. Each parent taking care of not just their own offspring but that of their significant other's. The bond between Arnav and Meera is simply lovely. I know that a bond between Mohan and Khushi would take a while yet but there is the beginning of acceptance.
Arnav's description of his wait just tugged at the heart strings.
A beautiful update.

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Pdrover IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Wonderful chapter
Loved their family time tending to injured kids, Meera is a sweetheart
And loved lavnya's advise to khushi regarding certain sexy-dish

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Mysterious_s Senior Member

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 9:37am | IP Logged
Lovely chapter :)

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Spoonai Goldie

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 11:35am | IP Logged
No words to explain how much I loved loved this update!!! Meera and Mohan relationship really amazed me and it promises a stronger and healthier bond in the future. And I really love the idea of the big sister protecting her younger brother :) 
Arnav and khushi intense moments are die for and I can't wait to read more of those. Just wish for khushi to loosing up a little, I know it's hard on hEr but heart just wish :) 
 Really hope she make the first attempt sometime :) 
Can't wait for their night talk to continue :) 

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moonstonespirit Senior Member

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
This was an amazing update!!!
I loved the way yo have built the relationships round your characters. 

Mohan- Khushi: Loved how you portrayed the sense of touch here. His acceptance of touch as a measure of his progress.

Meera- Mohan: I have no words for them. Bless them!! Babies are such love. Arnav and Khushi must be proud parents. Their babies are growing up!! 

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faffy Goldie

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
I am, as usual, at a loss for words ... to appreciate a story of such exquisiteness, poignancy and profundity.

The subtle play of emotions; the magnanimity of characters, the undercurrents of hesitancy and the power of love ... were so impeccably brought forth in this update!


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Poju Senior Member

Joined: 23 May 2012
Posts: 569

Posted: 13 June 2015 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
Ohh my god!!! I can't believe u stopped there.. How cruel of you to keep us hanging at the edge.. U are definitely going get a dhishum from me.. 
Anyways the update super duper awesome.. Kids are really amazing.. Meera I jus love DAT Lil girl.. So much maturity.. So sober n understanding.. She will be a great sis to Mohan.. N its good he is warming up to khushi n meera.. Jus one added plus point to them..

There is so much progress with arnav n khushi.. Really happy.. I feel sad for arnav.. It must be so much diff to handle a child on his on being a man.. Khushi n arnav are made for each other..

N lavanyas call was on right time . DAT piece of advice was so needed at this time.. She is confused so wat better than a friend's pep talk..

Now m jus waiting for the next update.. Waiting is very diff u know Mirabells.. U gotta update by 20th.. No cheating plz..


Edited by Poju - 13 June 2015 at 1:41pm

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