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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 83)

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 12:49am | IP Logged
Beautiful chapter Mira.. Emotions were unmasked, and they were all out in the open. There was love, acceptance  and doubt.  I hope Arnav's patience and love will help Khushi overcome her doubts. She will learn that NK is not between them, but will be with them. And she is not going to lose him again. 

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 1:08am | IP Logged
How do I start commenting on this sensitive and intimate chapter?

You started the chapter with such a sweet and caring bond. Two souls founding solace form each other and bonding like sisters. Manoraman'a concern for losing Khushi is so touching and the concern and assurance receive from Madhu is amazing. 

You moved from sisterhood bond to lovers. The transition was beautiful. The intimate scene was beautifully pen down. 

Will Khushi be able to move on with Arnav, while she is still holding too much on NK. Is she feeling that she is still married to NK? Was it the reason for her holding back? Or is she in fear of losing him, like every one she loves leaves her like, she lost her parents and NK? How can one overcome this kind of insecurity? Insecurity which is within oneself is very hard thing to fight? To overcome such insecurities, one had to fight from the core. I hope Khushi would realize how special Arnav is and how Lucky to get the second chance in life is. I wish Manarama and Lav will help to overcome this insecurity. 

You have respected the Muslims in this chapter and I respect you for that. 

Wish you a blessed Ramadhan to all the Muslims, in this forum. 

Until next time, keep penning down amazing words. You left us craving more? 


Edited by SharuAG - 20 June 2015 at 1:12am

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Wow, the way you bring out the emotions
those raw, plain, simple emotions
just amazing!!
Brings out those years from deep somewhere inside me!!!
also your sensuous scenes were just enough!!
What they should be, atleast according to me!!!!

Great job!!!
Take Care!!Smile

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 1:21am | IP Logged
You r a writer par excellence my dear friend,I am not only thankful to u but also to deepthi who had suggested ur ff.
I fell blessed to read ur work
A heartfelt THANK u that is what I can give back
Thank u

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Loved it...!!!! 

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 2:06am | IP Logged
That was one Hot scene with emotion.. All the built up desire 4 each other finally loose.. I just Admire Arnav character here. Hope khushi will let go of Nk soon..   seriously that was a hell of the update. Brilliant writing on this tough concept... I can't imagine this to be ur first writing... U R a SUPERB writer...

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That was one Hot scene with emotion.. All the built up desire 4 each other finally loose.. I just Admire Arnav character here. Hope khushi will let go of Nk soon..   seriously that was a hell of the update. Brilliant writing on this tough concept... I can't imagine this to be ur first writing... U R SUPERB a writer...

Edited by zayana123 - 20 June 2015 at 2:09am

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Loved loved it job well done

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