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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 81)

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 7:12am | IP Logged
sexy dish Raizada.. whatta name... loved the update..

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 8:08am | IP Logged
A lovely feeling of contentment after reading this chapter.. Outstanding work!

Loving this inner connection that seems to grow deeper and deeper.. I find the atmospher so romantic around them it's sheer bliss!

Waiting eagerly for the next...

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Thank you for your very kind words...
 
Your creativity to engage your readers is admirable..   you start a chapter by moving  it forward beyond where you ended the previous one..  the update allows a reflection for the reader to think hmm what happened...

Parenthood - The deepest wish for any parent is to protect  children forever but we simply can't...  The rough and tumble of childhood was depicted so well... These scars become stories that will be shared by Meera and Mohan in years to come, their versions will be exaggerated to some extent!

This family of four has made such strides in their lives.. Mohan has allowed enrichment from Meera to form a special bond that will only strengthen.. Meera who may not even be over the loss of her father has ensured her pain must not overshadow Mohans.. she will protect him always .. (my heart swelled with the pride Khushi must have felt upon seeing the bravery in her little girl)   Arnav has come to accept that this is the right time in life to wait for whom and what he wants for the rest of his life..  Khushi's heart and emotions have allied with Arnav!   Many moments can be spent going over the whys in life and sometimes there simply is no answer..this is where I see Khushi as she ponders over Amma's phone conversation, her trip and Lavanyas advice...  Here's to hickeys, kisses, eye locks and beyond  - teaser please  !!

"My heart might be bruised, but it will recover and become capable of seeing beauty of life once more. It's happened before, it will happen again, I'm sure. When someone leaves, it's because someone else is about to arrive--I'll find love again."  - Paul  Coelho
 

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 8:17am | IP Logged
superb update..
loved it.. lav-khushi's conversation was great..:-)

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Aww...absolutely a beautiful update...LOVED IT!!! :) 

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 8:33am | IP Logged
I am sucker for children and I love Mohan and Meera in your story and cant get enough of them. The way Khushi calms Mohan down is just so touching and he responds to her! I cannot imagine how this would have affected Arnav, who knows his son so well and this would have been so difficult otherwise. And Meera forgets her own pain and hurt in seeing Mohan's reaction!
They are slowly getting more secure in their feelings for each other and you are building that up so beautifully. It is harder for Khushi with her feelings of loss and guilt. Lavanya, as always is the best friend a girl can have and gives Khushi just the right amount of gentle pushing the Khushi needs. 

Great timing for a cliffhanger :-) But the update is coming soon and so it will be worth it!

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 8:53am | IP Logged
awesome

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Meera  and Mohan have become good friends , did not expect the little girl to help Mohan bandage forgetting her pain . Only a child can think so selflessly , at this point Meera more resembled like khushi . Both the kids are bonding strongly .
Arnav is very much willing to grab the second chance , but for khushi she is hesitating , though the second chance is tempting she doesn't want to wander into the forbidden territory .
 

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