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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 68)

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Posted: 05 June 2015 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Your blog doesn't like me. So here I am Big smile

Is there anything I can put in words that will fully and precisely articulate what I feel about this story and what it made me feel? I highly doubt it.  I'll make an attempt anyway.

 

I have rarely seen anyone write about grief the way you do - enough detachment to be precise and so much empathy to make it palpable. I feel my own gut twist every tim Khushi misses her Naren - and every time the inner war with her own conscience leaves her miserable. Every time she feels like she was born only to be abandoned. Sigh.

 

And there is Arnav - the gentle giant. I love that title Maya has bestowed upon this wonderful, kind, mysterious man. And a dish, of course! I will wait for you to tell me what exactly or how he made that decision to come to her doorstep after all these years. But am I glad he did - or we wouldn't have this wonderful story!

 

Mano makes me miss my own Paati - the woman who raised me and loved me more than anyone else. My role model and the finest woman I ever knew. And who left us all too early. And theres Meera - that chubby, perceptive little sweetheart.

 

But I think my favourite bits about this story are Mohan, and the relationship between Maya and Arnav.

 

Because it is so easy to judge Maya - and say that she was irresponsible and made all the wrong choices. That she is unworthy. But Arnav sees her for the person she is - he is able to empathise with her and her motivations. What a man, this Arnav! And how did you conjure up this fine character? I am in complete awe!

 

And there is Mohan - people don't even get child characters right, and you managed to make this young boy with ASD sink right into our hearts with the sheer realism and sensitivity in your writing. I was blown, really. And that scene where Mohan and Meera laugh that first time - I kid you not, I was in tears. I am rarely this overwhelmed.

 

I was always a fan of yours. Now I am this close to being a groupie :D Take a bow, Mira! What a fine story you have here - and thank you so much for sharing this with us!

 

PS - I could also go on and on about how well you tackled the whole idea of what is expected of a widow in society and how that confuses her about her own feelings - unable to differentiate between what is real and what is forced. But I'll save that for a later day, yeah?  



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Posted: 05 June 2015 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Are we going to get a teaser this time too???? Day Dreaming

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Posted: 05 June 2015 at 10:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vgedin

Your blog doesn't like me. So here I am Big smile

I hate that my blog is unfriendly. I wonder why.

Thank you Twiggy.. Coming from another awesome author like yourself is supremely flattering. I was in love with your Polemic story. Your Arnav, the middle child, was/is drool-worthy! :)


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Posted: 05 June 2015 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Give us a teaser plz... like plzzz

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Posted: 05 June 2015 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
thx for sharing this article mira. all i can say that no one will really understand wat one goes through when losing someone they love unless they are in the same position...

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Posted: 05 June 2015 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
Ok. so folks asked for a teaser... and this time... it is a song... You can go ahead and speculate ...

Phir le aaya dil majboor kya keeje
Raas na aaya rehna door kya keeje
Dil keh raha use maqammal kar bhi aao
Wo jo adhoori si baat baaki hai
Wo jo adhoori si yaad baaki hai
Wo jo adhoori si yaad baaki hai

Karte hain hum aaj qabool kya keeje
Ho gayi thi jo humse bhool kya keeje
Dil keh raha use mayassar kar bhi aao
Wo jo dabi si aas baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
Wo jo dabi si... aanch baaki hai

Kismat ko hai yeh manzoor kya keeje
Milte rahe hum badastoor kya keeje
Dil keh raha hai use musalsal kar bhi aao
Wo jo ruki si raah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai
Wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai..


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Posted: 05 June 2015 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Ahhh... I love this song...Hug  Love the teaser!


Now let's hope these two follow their hearts...Heart





Edited by Chokri_ASR - 05 June 2015 at 2:31pm

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Posted: 05 June 2015 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
nice teaser

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