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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 64)

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 8:32am | IP Logged
after reading this update first thing that got into my mind was... 
Aakarshan door jaane na de... Asuraksha paas aane na de...


Poor Khushi.. She is struggling hard to control her feelings fighting with her emotions. And being very close to Arnav .. Looking straight into his caramel orbs.. Peeking into his heart and mind is not at all helping her to be sane. Her heart is craving for his closeness.. Her mind is warning to keep herself away from him. 

She should have realized by now that her heart won over her mind long time back .. When she kissed him. She should have believed by now that he is throwing away all her insecurities.. Sorrows.. To the corner with his sensitive touch of love. 

When his heart flinched with pain.. Why she should feel bad for making him to feel pain. When his eyes spoke about the inner grapple.. Why she should have to feel to make him feel better doing anything. Why she wanted to know everything about him and Mohan.. Why she wanted to know what is the current relation between him and his ex wife... Isn't it called love or at least it is
 called feelings for him if love is a big word at their current state. 

One thing that one cannot control is their heart. It never listens to its owner.. It never stops beating for its loved one. It never stops craving for the love. 

But I am happy that she is taking her steps forward to reach that treasure by keeping her thoughts about NK at bay.. I wish she takes the remaining steps with more courage and love and grasps her second chance before it gets too late.

Nice update Mira.

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The elasticity of time - Mira, such a beautiful thought provoking phrase.

The more you pull the elastic, the wider one feels the time has lapsed, and let the elastic go and it shrinks making us feel that the time elapsed is not that wide afterall.

It is such beautiful phrases which makes me fall in love with your writing more and more. 

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Once again apologies for my super late comments. My AD just swamped and overloaded. As I asked before how do you find perfect titles for every chapter yaar...I love them all.


Sumitra Raizada's wrinkled eyes and astute brain didn't miss anything related to her son or grandson. I love those witty ideas forming in her mind. Manorama and Kushi share such a unique bond and it is very rare sight to witness such comfort between MIL and SIL. Looks like Manorama also subconsciously wishing for Kushi to move on and have a chance with Arnav in back of her mind.


"he go to her or wait for her to come to him?"...Go Arnav...enough of procrastination and giving space for Kushi Wink. She needs you just like you need her.


Happy to see that Kushi talking about NK, her insecurities without much push from Arnav. I think with this conversation Kushi once again unlocked her heart and almost ready to give access to Arnav to explore further but all in good time.


I love Arnav schemes LOLWink. "If she wanted a kiss, then she had to get it". Arnav is evoking forbidden desires and self-imposed restrictions by Kushi with his simple touches. Now Kushi wants and he want her to take... no giving WinkLOL.

 

Now, Kushi wanted to know about Arnav's life in last decade. Wheels are turning and I can feel wind is changing direction Tongue. Pooch...Pooch... Acche kaam me deri nahi karani chahiye. 


"Arnav and Kushi... sitting on a tree... K.I.S.S.I.N.G. "...LOLLOL...I love Maya and her anecdotes."Ready to cool off"...oh yeah...after that series of missed kisses she needs it damn it Smile


Again cliffhanger Angry. Wish we got more glimpse into Arnav - Maya life Ouch



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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 9:47am | IP Logged
unresed here

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 9:58am | IP Logged
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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by canapoem

Originally posted by kushikumari

Originally posted by kizh72

And all those filter coffee references brings back the times when I have cribbed to my mom for not making me a coffee as strong as the one she made for my dadLOL At the risk of sounding blasphemous (in today's times, it can very well be!), nothing beats the south indian filter kaapi, starbucks be damned!

i second that!

And to be drunk in a steel tumbler. 

of course!! 
is it that time of the year to travel back? the pull of the filter coffee smell is sooo strong...

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Nice update

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