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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 61)

mu12 Senior Member

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 9:24am | IP Logged
waw nice chapter
kushi seems uncomfortable with maya
i think they will come in terms
i think be honest i am more love with maya than any character

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LadyR Goldie

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 9:40am | IP Logged
What the heart wants is love .. Love does not request, love provides..

The whirlwind of emotions within Khushi are seeping to the surface and it's visible for all to see.. Nanis' wisdom allows her to see it.. Arnavs love for her allows him to see it..  has Meera seen a happiness on her mothers face that was missing for so long?  Khushi herself has seen the image of family, upon seeing Mohan and Meera interact.. and yet still she is understandably hesitant. They read each others minds... they complete each others thoughts ..

I want Khushi and Maya to talk ... Maya has grabbed her second chance with both hands and an open heart,  and this did not stop her from caring for Arnav.
Mohans' existence is and always will be because of Maya and Arnav..likewise Meeras' existence will always be because of Khushi and Naren..  this is an undeniable truth.  

Deep down I believe that Khushi will come to realize the second chance is not just for her but for everyone ... A generation of Mothers with hearts full  of nurturing .. from Nani to Amma to Khushi ...    

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angullgrl91 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 10:15am | IP Logged
awesome update! 
deeswarna IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 10:29am | IP Logged
that was one very emotional but still beautifully written update. i liked the fact that in this update it was arnav's time to open up about his past and to let through glimpse through which circumstances he had gone through to be the man he is today.

zindaagi bhi kuch ajeeb si hoti hain, i bet arnav never thought he and maya will be end up being divorced or that he is child will be a special one in his own way but the most important one that fate will be offerring him another go at happiness, another chance to be with the one he has always dream of. i just hope that fate doesnt play its dirty games again and he is left again with only memories, i guess this time letting go of khushi will be disastrous for him

i can understand khushi's fear in losing all the people who cares and loves her but still she shouldnt be sentenced to a life of loneliness because of that, she too deserves to be happy, loved and cherished, i think arnav has managed to break the ice between them and soon he ll get khushi to talk to him about her fears and the things in the past that compelled her to send him away the first time. i loved the little stolen kiss and im sure that this has left them wanting for more... n she does care for she wont be as uneasy as she was when she knew that it was maya on the end of the phone with arnav.

n u say it absolutely right meera and mohan do compliment each. meera can be the one who can reach out to mohan. he is much more at ease with her. she has been accepted by him and included in the list of people he can trust. n nani is for sure a sweetheart, like everyone else she wants her kids to be happy and she knows that this can happen only with the two ladies who have managed to make such a special place in her heart.

poor maya, i felt so bad for her, she has gone through so much pain, a mother usually waits to spend  the first few months with her baby, its the time that they get to know each other but its so sad that she has missed all this. but its good that she has recuperated so well.

looks like ive said too much today. lol. waiting for the next update mira...

Edited by deeswarna - 02 June 2015 at 10:29am

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luvraj4ever IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Lovely update. ..I am loving this family time. ..literally. ...arnav, khushi and mohan and meera. ..they all really make a beautiful family. ...I can't wait to know more about arnav and maya's sure there is more to them than it seems...
Loved the romance and confusion in arnav and khushi. ..khushi really needs to move on...I know its very difficult. ...but still...
Waiting to read more..
Continue soon

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swtsam IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
awesome. ...beautiful update. ...

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Awesome update! :)

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kushikumari Goldie

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Posted: 02 June 2015 at 4:31pm | IP Logged
i have lost count of the number of times i have started putting down my thoughts today. feel like i am intruding, that i will almost shatter the web you have weaved, for it is still fragile...

the elasticity of time... hmm... have you ever been left with a feeling that time has paused to bask in the moment with you? not when time flies and we wish endlessly that if only it would pause, not when we watch the clock every so often only to realize that the seconds time has not made much progress. but the time when we savor the wonderful moments... i have.  when i contemplate on something i have read and let it all soak in, or after a good meditation session. there is a stillness within, and it seems to extend outwards, beyond us. as if to reach out and stretch time, so that even time can bask in this special moment with us... and that is what this chapter makes me feel like...

By no means an easy one to write. on the surface, it is just two people getting closer while on a walk... 

But they do come with their flaws, their demons, their fears, like anyone else. The beauty though is in the way your characters deal with the challenges. no running away, no blame games, no tantrums, no drama. instead a very mature, and a very conscious decision to rise above pettiness every single time. where ego has no place whatsoever. where patience pays. yet, each one rolling in emotions difficult to handle, difficult to come to terms with... wondering if anything, anything at all would be normal ever again, even if for a short time. and yet, never giving in... setting aside these feelings to be the strength for others... 

there is sadness in every chapter, yet you end on a positive note, leaving us (yes us!) either breathless, reeling, peaceful, or grinning. and this is what i mean when i say, it is not easy... to constantly, as a writer, push the challenges that life throws at us down, and not make it the center of every chapter. to not let emotions, but actions, drive the characters. 

the layers and depth in this story astounds me. each time i read, i come up with something new. a treasure trove indeed with human actions. with lessons on how to be. 

leaves me wondering how much we are capable of as humans when we set our mind to it...


Edited by kushikumari - 02 June 2015 at 4:46pm

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