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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 56)

..ri.. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
great update.. loved it..

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Downhill IF-Addictz

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
simply brilliant
loved it

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SharuAG Senior Member

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
MIRA, what do I say about your words of magic. It left me with no words. You are a born poet, a unique writer. You have your own singnature in the way you pour the words. This is a brilliant piece of art. 
Wink You have left us hanging till the very end of the chapter and you gave just a tiny weeny smooch. How could you do this to usCry? We were looking forward for a full blown kiss. Anyways, all this romantic gestures are not far. I can see it from the horizon. So, this time we will settle with the tiny weeny bit. 

Mohan and Meera are bonding naturally just like two siblings. I have a feeling that this bond will result in Khushi to reconsider the feelings toward Arnav and she will be left with no option but to consider in giving a chance, rather than holding herself.

I wonder what is Maya's story that Arnav referred. Was is that the realization of Arnav still having feelings for Khushi Gupta? 

Arnav and Maya must have gone through a really tough time during her post delivery.  Maya must be devastated for not being able to tend her new born, and Arnav must have gone through the same to see her in that situation. 

The story has come to a cross road where I am unable to wait for the next update. Wish you could give the whole story in one go, but I can understand. 

Eagerly waiting for the next update. Until then,Smile

Edited by SharuAG - 03 June 2015 at 9:30am
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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
nice update

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Anu567 Goldie

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 9:06pm | IP Logged


You surpassed yourself with this update as always. Keeping pace with Arnav and Khushi's walk, I read the chapter slo...o..wly. After all, we now have to wait ten days for the next update. So,Ike some exotic dessert, I tried to relish it at a more leisurely pace this time! 

Beautiful...the build up to the walk, Sumitra Raizada's impatient restraint, the children's enthusiasm to be off and away, Arnav and Khushi's losing themselves in their own thoughts...and then the walk itself. 

So well narrated...their coming together one moment, their breaking away the next. Their relationship and feelings for one another wax and wane like the keeping with Khushi's thoughts...

So, we did not get the kiss and intimacy, but certainly progress on many levels for their relationship itself as Arnav opens up to her, and Khushi sees his pain. She also realizes how simple it could be to just embrace life and love with this man...and ah, a discordant note with Maya goading Arnav on...Khushi is so jealous...loved that aspect though I cannot help wonder if Maya has completely made her peace with her decision to separate from Arnav. Does she want him to continue yearning for what they may have had? Or is she simply a friend trying to help him find his soulmate? Hmm...

In all, I loved it through and through...will leave the steering of this ship in your capable hands, as we chart course for new waters...and they move on in their relationship.



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sweety421 Goldie

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
Wonderful dear

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..Anita.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 9:30pm | IP Logged
I hope Khushi let's go of her demons soon
Lovely update 

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Dreamy123 Senior Member

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Just amazing...reading it again and love love it 
Thank you 

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