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Posted: 8 years ago
I feel like so much has changed in these last few weeks but at no point did it feel rushed. Nothing felt induced. It just felt natural.

The way you've been telling the story, I think I know everyone's perspectives. And I don't know how you do it because it's difficult. As a writer you want your readers to know the characters the way you see them which cannot be achieved by just putting out a small paragraph citing that characters' qualities. It takes time to reveal a story, bit by bit, knowing when to stop, when to say exactly what and getting to know each of the characters as if they're real people you meet and learn a little more about, everyday. It's inspiring, in some ways. :)

We're already half way there! It feels like we've traveled so far from where we'd begun. I can still go back to when I read this for the first time, when Khushi opened to door to a familiar face. I can't pin point to when things changed exactly, but now things do feel different. Khushi still has her demons to fight and Arnav's more determined than ever and I am back. :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: xshilohx

It feels so good to FINALLY catch up. 




I missed you here dammit. Glad you are back. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: 1chilly

A teaser MB, that too on page 69.

Methinks this has a hidden meaning.๐Ÿ˜‰
Hehe! My dirty mind is working at double speed.โ˜บ๏ธ
Now that you have teased us with this lovely song, I want the update yesterday



 
Oh sister!! There is always, ALWAYS a double meaning and I love your mind's speed and the dirt!! 



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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: SharuAG

I love the song, but I do not understand the meaning of the song. My Hindhi is not that good. 

So, I cound't get the indented meaning of the teaser, anyways, will wait for the update. I 'm sure it's going to be one of the best! 


Here you go.. hope this helps. :)

Wo jo ruki si/ Phir le aaya dil: Lyrics, Translation (Barfi)

Movie: Barfi!
Music: Pritam
Singer: Arijit Singh/ Rekha Bharadwaj

phir le aaya dil majboor kya keeje
raas na aaya rehna door kya keeje
dil keh raha use maqammal kar bhi aao
wo jo adhoori si baat baaki hai
wo jo adhoori si yaad baaki hai
wo jo adhoori si yaad baaki hai

the helpless heart has brought me here again, what to do,
staying away wasn't good to me, what to do..
the heart says go complete-
that talk that remains still incomplete,
that memory that remains still incomplete,
that memory that remains still incomplete..

karte hain hum aaj qubool kya keeje
ho gayi thi jo humse bhool kya keeje
dil keh raha use mayassar kar bhi aao
wo jo dabi si aas baaki hai
wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai
wo jo dabi si aanch baaki hai..

today I admit, what to do,
there was a mistake that I did, what to do,
the heart says, go get it,
that one suppressed wish that is there (in the heart)..
that one suppressed spark that is there,
that one suppressed spark that is there..

kismat ko hai yeh manzoor kya keeje
milte rahe hum badastoor kya keeje
dil keh raha hai use musalsal kar bhi aao
wo jo ruki si raah baaki hai
wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai
wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai
wo jo ruki si chaah baaki hai..

The fate wishes this, what to do,
let us keep meeting as we do, what to do,
the heart says, go make it forever,
that stuck path that is there,
that stuck wish that is there.. 
that stuck love that is there..
- See more at: http://www.bollymeaning.com/2012/08/wo-jo-ruki-si-phir-le-aaya-dil-lyrics.html#sthash.iSC4szLO.dpuf
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks For Teaser...
Please PM me when you update...
 
 
๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ 
 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mira  when are we getting the update?  Like Maya me too waiting ๐Ÿ˜‰Edited by -Bhavi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: -Bhavi

Mira  when are we getting the update?  Like Maya me too waiting ๐Ÿ˜‰



 Teri Umeed Tera Intezaar Karten Hain 

Ae MB Hum To Sirf Arnav se Pyaar Karte Hain ๐Ÿ˜‰


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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: canapoem



 Teri Umeed Tera Intezaar Karten Hain 

Ae MB Hum To Sirf Arnav se Pyaar Karte Hain ๐Ÿ˜‰



Bahut pyaar karte hain Is story se hum;
 kasam chahe le lo MB ki kasamโค๏ธ

And on lighter note

Humko Arshi se pyaar hain
Update  kaa intezaar hain

Aaja meri MB
Story ke liye jeeya bekarar hain๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by -Bhavi - 8 years ago