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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 35)

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
awesome update... beautifully written.. loved it Smile

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
hi i msorry but i dont know what i like more the beautful ndignified characters u have written or your story in short i love it thks for updating

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
Sigh I was all set to revisit taj from your eyes but I guess all good things does not come easily.
There I said it now and so will be able to talk about update.

Mira I have a big smile when I read about the seniors in your update. Today Sumitra was on roll. She was just happy seeing hire son happy and naughty. Keeping her fingers crossed she is wishing for that perfect family that she witnessed in the last scene. 

The kiddos as always were the ones full of energy. Today Mohan joined  Meera and him accepting Meera is a welcoming change for everyone. I am happy that you have not shown Meera as a complaint child who complaints about anything. 

I am glad that despite her fears Khushi found solace in Arnav. The convo about NK was beautiful. How tactfully did Arnav articulate her from tears to smile - shows that Arnav is a gem of person.Big smile

Today we had a glimpse of khushi's fear about how she is afraid of people leaving herOuch. My heart went for her when she was convincing Manorama to take her with her. For once I too wished that she  does not leave her alone.

Stage is set now Mira with seniors gone does it mean we will have more Arshi next time?


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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
Beutiful just amazing thanks for early update can't wait to read more thanks

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
Mirabell,

Thank you for the lo...o...ovely chapter...so in love with it. Arnav Singh Raizada in his element...more than a little in love with him...whether Khushi is or not. LOL He has an innate ability to get under your skin and inspire confidences. Such a man is definitely not just hard to find, but a keeper if anyone ever was! Enjoyed reading the way he manages to get his way, subtly, slowly...at times using the kids to make a point, at times asking her about NK...Khushi's insecurities are all too apparent...and I reckon not entirely in her head either...she realizes, and perhaps rightly so, that any tryst she may choose to have with Arnav will affect a lot of lives and relationships...hers and Manorama's is just one of those. Will she give herself the freedom to fall in love and fight for that love too this time around? I dare say she will. She will probably have no choice if ASR has his way! Cannot wait now for the lovely walk to the riverbank. 

Also loved the fact that you gave us Sumitra's perspective...in many ways she is the objective narrator in this whole scenario...er, did I say objective? Perhaps not! She is Arnav's grandmother and so is definitely invested in seeking his happiness...but like the reader...her mind does a happy dance every time she sees him and Khushi move one step forward...so in many ways she is probably the one that will push this relationship forward and give it the official seal of approval when the time is right...wonderful...I could go on and on...this story brings with it a spring in the stride and a gladness of the heart that few stories can claim to do. Thank you for that. I hope you will give us another momentous chapter soonish...until then shall re-read 'Secret Alchemies' ...truly one of the best to date in this journey of love and discovery! Love it!


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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
thank you for such a lovely chapter..it just goes on like a soft symphony..
loved the convo at the breakfast..
its very tough to move on but time heals every pain and for khushi this time with arnav is much needed..

felt bad for a moment for khushi when manorama left in spite of her request, and khushi left with her insecurities..but i know this is much needed..

loved d way arnav understood her fears and succeeded in bringing her back to herself..its very big step for both khushi and arnav..

sumitra is such a wonderful lady..just a look at her grandson and she knew there's something big to come and she did found it too..

loved the last scene when the two elders moving together followed by the lil ones..i know long way for that to happen..Smile

lovveddd itHug



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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
Thank you for the notification!
An amazing update. Is khushi feeling guilty for not telling her Amma about Arnav. It seems that she wanted to tell her about Arnav, but holding back due to their tradition or their cultural belief. 

Irespective of her insecurities or whatever Khushi is feeling, the way she find solace in Arnav is amazing. 

I can see Sumitra playing Cupid in the absence of the other two ladies and she will find a way to convince the other ladies to take part in playing Cupid too. 




Edited by SharuAG - 22 May 2015 at 10:27pm

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
Read it.
The first part brought tears in my eyes - I just didn't know until I saw the ink on the paper in my lap getting spread - that was simply superb

The second one brought a huge grin on my face - do I have to say why - oh Iam so so in love with this story
Will be commenting once again after re reading it

bTW, 1chilly is my favourite too - I love to read charu's comments

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