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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 35)

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 8:51am | IP Logged
I love how sensitively you've handled this story. The situation at hand is difficult for both Khushi and Manorama. It's tricky for Arnav, and Meera has yet to realize what is actually happening here. I wish more people were like Manorama, it's difficult to watch Khushi move on, but she realizes that she needs to push her in that direction for Khushi to have a second chance at happiness. For Meera to have a father again. That was the most touching part in the whole update for me. She's an amazing woman. 

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 9:14am | IP Logged
You have such a way with words it seems magical...
Just a magnificent and awesome update...

Thank you for the email!

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 9:44am | IP Logged
Nice update... loving the bond between Meera-Mohan... these kids are so adorable... ArShi convo is beautifully written,  loved his willingness to know about NK... nd Manorama-Khushi convo too... khushi is lucky to have her in her life... last but not the least, now naniji too is dreaming again for her granschild's happy future, its lovely to see... waiting to see ahead...

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No words to describe. It is so beautifully  written.

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Hey bells.. Loved the update.. Thanks for PM..
Khushi.. She is really a strong person.. Hats off to her.. I don blame her of being hesitant to give herself a second Chance.. A person who loses so much will always have low self confidence or rather she will be scared to give into new relation.. 
I jus hope Arnav breaks into her wall.. N brings her out of her doubts..

N I loved Arnav n nani's silent interaction.. How cool off her.. Hehehe..

Can't wait to read it next update.. 

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 10:58am | IP Logged
awesome update 

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 12:44pm | IP Logged
I liked how you showed or at least hinted to the inner turmoil Manorama is going through. She can clearly see how drawn Khushi and Meera are towards Arnav. Another man who is not her Naren. This can't be easy.

She is aware that Khushi is still a young woman with a young child and that both yearn for the person they have lost. And here is this other man who is clearly attached to her daughter and grandchild. Someone who could take all their pain away. The part when she watches Meera and Moham was on point. It pretty much expressed all what I wrote in just that short of a scene.

The other poignant part was Arnav and Khushi's talk about NK. Him helping her hold onto NK's ring says so much which I can't put into words. I hope she realizes that Arnav doesn't just want her to move on like it's no big deal.

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Awesome! loved it.. Smile

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