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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 133)

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Posted: 25 July 2015 at 2:10am | IP Logged

A lot of thoughts and a lot of feelings without the need for anyone saying!

I think we have reached that stage of the story where the understandings have taken over the apprehensions of every relationship. It is still going to be a long drive before the understandings can turn into anything meaningful. But with you at the helm Mira, I am sure the drive will be worth every twist and turn. We are all lucky that there are enough vantage points where we can sit back and relax and watch you zipping through that black stripDay Dreaming.

Merriment and happiness, playful roughhousing, giggles and smirks, collective buffoonery - I had to read a second time just to make sure, this was really about removing band aid's from a kidLOL. Somewhere in all that you also figured out a way to throw in the mole at the base of her nape, peck on his lips, and slipping out of his arms, it's no wonder Khushi could feel his eyes on her neck. And with all the happiness around, it's no wonder Mohan had a smile on his face and sense of accomplishment be please pleased with himself.

Manorama's might have realized that something is off here and she may need some more time to figure out an exact name for the relationship they share. But her thoughts reflect the mood of change that a few strangers bought in their life. Her two girls may be in tears fearing the loss of the cheers they had for the past few days. If she only looked closer, I am sure she can find the same tears on the strangers too. I am sure the ladies of the sisterhood of the sorrow' will figure out the conundrumBig smile.    

I have to admit that the drive on the black strip was the enjoyable one for me. I am glad Khushi, courtesy of the back seat, got her chance to elicit some of her gazing revengeClap. She can finally make her choice, one glimpse at a time for long drive ahead. I am also glad that the smirks, winks and frowns are back. She might have won the first round or should I say, he lost of the first round? Or should I say, he made her win the first round? But, who would be keeping score when everyone playing is winningWink.

This chapter is just another example on how much we miss your cool summer breeze of writing. Now that you have ended on a promise of a long drive, I am sure it can only get better from hereWink



Edited by bhavali4RR - 26 July 2015 at 1:07pm

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Posted: 25 July 2015 at 2:39am | IP Logged
love the way u write abt each chaacter  beautiful story n beautiful characters thk u

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Beautiful Update..Simply Awesome...Clap

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Thank u for the update.. Was waiting impatiently for it. "The black strip of the road was being eaten by the zipping car, the road endless and the ride smooth."... Proves again that u write beautifully... 

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awesome

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waiting to see how they work out a plan tomeet

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Thank u for updating...Big smile
The update is fabulous...Clap Loving this storyHug

Hope so Arnav & Khushi give their relation another chance & this time dont let go off the other... This time it should be, "Death do us apart thing" for Arnav & KhushiDay Dreaming

Please try & update quickly...

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fabulous. ...loved it...

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