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SaHil FF: Eternally Yours, Epilogue, P42, Dec14.2016 (Page 27)

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Posted: 03 November 2015 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
@sahil333 - Thanks! Aahil is Aahil. He will always be insecure about his love. This was the man who fell in love with Sanam and gave her up without really trying. He was ready to marry Nida. So, what can you expect from him? He'll get his chance, but I can't promise soon. Evil Smile Glad you enjoyed Seher's thoughts. Will try to update the soonest.

@MysticRiver - Thanks! glad you liked it.

@LoveSonu2408 - Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'm also happy you liked the SeHan part. I was a little worried about sticking that in a SaHil fic, so am really happy that people didn't mind too much. I will try to update soon! Big smile

@tazzz - Aww! I'm so happy that you liked the chapter. Blushing I'm so touched at the description - amazing and perfect? I will try to update soon so I don't  keep you all in suspense too long. Smile

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- Thanks for the huge compliments. I would never judge you for feeling for Aahil. He is a broken man, and I can't help but sympathize with him myself. As for Sanam's statement at the end of their gate encounter - this time she got to walk away and he was left watching her. Hopefully her words will stick with him the way he stuck with her. I'm glad you enjoyed the SeHan parts. I tried to make them cute and they deserved their time in the spotlight, as well. Tongue And thanks for the praise on the VM. I hope they're adding something to the reading experience.

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Yyaayy!! I finally got around to reading the latest chapter. To be honest, I wasn't sure if I was going to like this chapter as much as the others because I've never been a SeHan fan. But that doubt went away as I got into the chapter. See the problem with SeHan was that their story was so rushed that I couldn't connect with them. Not only that but they had Rehan a whole monologue about Sanam being his sacchi mohabat, and right when he leaves Ibrahim Mansion, he falls in love with Seher. That didn't sit well with me either. Neither did Sehar's OTT behavior.
But you have done an amazing job here. We're getting to see SeHan work on their relationship and grow, which is very important. The flashback of SeHan meeting was cute too. I'm hoping the truth about how Haya and Rehan are related will also be coming forth soon. Smile

As for SaHil, well I am biased when it comes to Aahil lol. I don't always agree or like the way he handles situations but I also know that inside he's a sad, broken man going through so much pain. So I just can't stay mad at him for too long lol. I thoroughly enjoyed reading about their conversation by the gate. And I'm so proud of Sanam for taking the lead and just walking away.. Haha!
I'm glad the girls found out the truth at the end because relationships built on lies and deceit don't last long. So I'm happy that truth is out in the open in front of all 4.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter. Clap

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Haayyee.. Such a beautiful banner. Really made me miss this heartwarming couple.As always, it's a delight to read each chapter which has so much passion and angst.

I had chills running down my spine by Asad's words. And to read the way Sanam cooped about the matter really left a big mark on my being. Clap

He had lied to her! Every time he let her call him some other man's name, he lied to her. Every time, he hid any bit of himself from her, he lied to her. Any time . . . he told her he loved her, he lied to her. She sobbed near silently, the tears beginning to fall and fall in earnest. There was nothing that she could do to stop them this time. She ruthlessly wiped them away, bringing herself back under control.


Followed by Nazia and Shazia's conversation.. I'm a mess.. My God, I just want to reach out for Aahil. He's this broken human being, who just wants to forget everything. Prentend that nothing happened.. If only, it was that easy.


"Do you have any idea what I lost because of my past?"

"Rather than hide from it any longer, I did all of us a favor by revealing it. It won't be hanging over our heads like the Sword of Damocles, saving us from dreaming too long. What if I had gotten used to the dream?" 


I ABSOLUTELY LOVED the angst-filled conversation between Sanam and Aahil. I'm not even just saying it, but it was literally perfect. This scene is so going to be in my heart for as long as I might know. Day Dreaming


 
"I wasn't going to be that abused little boy!" He stopped, swallowing with difficulty. "I wasn't going to be someone to be pitied. Not to you!"


Kudus for you to portray some heart-wrenching dialogues. Hug Clap

"Mr. Aahil Raza Ibrahim," she said, moving her face closer to his, her lips millimeters away from his, "Don't assume anything. We're nowhere near being done. Neither my father nor you get to decide what I should do."


Hell yeah, that's our Miss Dhabewali. Gosh, seeing her as a strong willed woman as she always have been, is such a delight to read.

Now, coming to Seher and Rehan.. It was tough reading about Seher's dilemma. All the question she had in her mind, of who the man she had loved wholeheartedly, really was. Heart

And the flashbacks.. Gah.. Those were wonderful to read too.

"Why do you think I've been chasing you around? Why did I come to your home uninvited? Why did I peek at you from behind pillars while you read a book?! God forbid that you do something exciting like swim around naked in the pool you have in the middle of your living room!"

You don't want to date me, that's fine. But don't pretend to care." She practically spat those words at him. 

"It means that we're going on that damned first date," he growled at her. "And then we'll go on a second date. And then a third. We'll date so much that you'll grow tired of dating me!"


LOL - Good one! This is brilliant. You've managed to get it all. Drama, angst, humor and above all romance. I am seriously in love with this story.

And she hadn't been ashamed because he'd caught her . . . with his words . . . his sweetness . . . the good that was clearly inside of him. She'd known from near the beginning that she would never feel this deeply again. His every touch . . . his every look made her tremble. But had any of it been real for him?


So precious. I love the fact that Sanam and Seher are so similar yet very different from one another.  They are both determined to reach out for the truth -their love. To help those wounded men and bring them back into light. Heart

"Da*n you, Rehan Imran Qureshi," she muttered angrily. "You're not going to get away that easily."


Whoa... You cannot end it with a cliffhanger.. You just made me crave more of this beautiful story. I swear it's like reading a thrilling book and you're just going through page after page to keep reading..

You my Love.. Is one precious writer. You need all the encouragement and appreciating for this one. Cannot wait to read the next installment, so do have mercy on your lovely readers and update soon. HugHeart

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Well well... what a mess they've landed up in... Aahan that is... If only they'd revealed it all to SaSe... but I guess there is a right time for everything

Asad's reaction is totally justified... the over-protective father that he is

Sanam got to witness the conversation between Aahil & his sisters... I must say you portrayed them too well... Shazia & Nazia I mean Clap... I love how you recreated that scene with all the dj vu... It has been the most pivotal scene of your story... the most significant... one of my favorite scenes too... so full of emotions yet so beautiful Clap... And Aahil's monologue... the confession was so sincere... "If the truth came out too late, I would have never let her go. No matter how much she may have begged me." Broken Heart

And Sanam, the ever-understanding lady... Perfect for Aahil Day Dreaming *sigh*... yet so determined & hopeful... "...Neither my father nor you get to decide what I should do."... The warning that she left him with in the end... "You're not going to get away that easily, Aahil Raza Ibrahim."... Wow!! Miss Dhaabevali!! She isn't ready to let go of him Thumbs Up

Then comes Seher... Oh how she feels happy, yet guilty for the same... Those Sehan flashbacks are so cute... until she confronts him that is... but you even wrote that in full detail... I actually chuckled when she asked him "Do you like Haya?" LOL... It's so realistic... women & their insecurities... Wait till she gets to know Haya is Rehan's sister LOL

Now to SaSe conversation... It was too sweet... That twin telepathy they share solves most of their problems I would say... Like how neither of them is ready to give up... and then Seher says "Then why don't we go over there and confront those idiots?" LOL... Nice humorous Seherous one-liner you've thrown in there amidst all the sorrow & tears LOL

And finally the cliffhanger... Oh my God!!! Shocked Another bomb-shell revelation for SaSe... I hope things get sorted out soon & they accept each other for good

Amazing flawless chapter as usual buddy Hug ... Loved reading it... Actually I love the entire story LOL Eagerly waiting for the next part... Continue soon

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@Booteefool - Totally understandable regarding SeHan. I myself wasn't sure about that. Honestly, I only thought about writing on them when a reader requested it, feeling that they should get their time in the spotlight, as well. And the more I thought about it, the more sense it made to me. I'm glad that your doubts went away once you read the chapter. Wink I think we're all biased when it come to Aahil. You're not alone. Sanam was always someone I respected, at least until the show butchered her character on the altar of TRPs. Glad you're liking her here. Will try to update soon.

@shailu123 -  Thank you! I'm glad you're liking both the SaHil and the SeHan parts! I did see sparks of a Seher I could like in the show, but because of how the writers portrayed her, she didn't completely work for me. That's why I'm really enjoying this chance to work with her character in this story. I'm happy you're finding her enjoyable. Blushing

@mahwash22 - Glad you liked the banner! As for Aahil, the poor guy does have to suffer through a lot, doesn't he? That's why I'm sure it drives all of us so crazy what his end was. Cry But here, despite how stubborn he is, I promise that Sanam will not let him get away that easily. Evil Smile You got a hint of that during their conversation.  I'm glad you liked the SeHan parts. Read my comments above for Booteefool. Even though I decided to write about them, it took me a while to think up the direction I wanted to take this. Glad you enjoyed it.  Will try to update soon. Thanks for the compliments. Hug I already have the next chapter (well, the entire story really) outlined. Will begin working on it soon. Am not being sadistic when I make you all wait. LOL

@innocentangel4u - I'm glad that gate scene struck you. That deja vu was exactly what I was going for. I always felt there was so much more they could have done with Shazia/Nazia. I secretly always thought Nazia was really the nefarious one. LOL She just did a really good job of hiding it. As for Sanam, this was the strong character we got to know, and no matter the amount of butchering they did to her character later on . . . this is how she remains in my mind.  SaSe could have been such good sisters, each others strengths, if the writers hadn't felt they had to weaken one to make the other look better. I'm glad you're liking their relationship in this.


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  • I don't know what to say... They all are just broken... But I LOVE this story... please continue soon.. I can't wait longerCry

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I absolutely loved it.
Update soon!

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