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SaHil FF: Eternally Yours, Epilogue, P42, Dec14.2016 (Page 10)

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Posted: 07 July 2015 at 7:45am | IP Logged
Oh yeah, forgot to say, I love the banner Thumbs UpTongue

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Posted: 07 July 2015 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Awesome backstory. . Like the build up. . Clap

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Posted: 07 July 2015 at 8:43am | IP Logged
lovely mix and update

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I'm going to start with the opening quote:

He made a face, an annoyed huff leaving his lips. Why couldn't he . . . but there it was! A single, bright light in the sky.  A star!

He smiled triumphantly.

 
THIS is our Aahil. Clap Who still have a small hope that maybe something is in store for him. Something that will make all his deep hidden scars vanish.. And he'll be able to see the light even though it might be around him. But this time he'll see it for sure. 


The quote really hit me hard. It made me think about the characterization of ARI. The man he is and has become despite being through so much in his childhood. He is still courageous for seeking hope... in the dark night..Embarrassed  (Don't mind me.. I tend to get emotional and highly writer-ish when I read LOL..)

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I need to confess.. I just read all the parts again and trust me, it was as beautiful and magical to read than it was the first time. Star


I am in love with this story! It's amazing, exciting, mysterious and did I say amazing? You never fail to deliver an awesome chapter where you're left with a need for more. That's how I feel right now... I need more to read... You've got to update soon.


Also can I just say that I absolutely love the Banner! I love the coloring and the pictures you've chosen to include. I can tell that every pic has a meaning to the story.. Thumbs Up 


Alright coming to your beautiful work.. The amount of pain and curuousity is so well written. I can't help but feel a tug at my heart whenever I take a glance over the words. The sorrow from Aahil's side of being an abused child.. The determination from Sanam's side in order to reach out for people and help those in need.


I adore the sheer brotherhood Aahil and Rehan share. Day Dreaming I loved how you decided to write how they met each other. I could really notice how Aahil truly reached forward to have a friend. Someone who liked him who he was and not because of his Royal Title.


 
"What's wrong with me being Aahil Raza Ibrahim? I feel like I should be apologizing for something that is not my fault."

"Don't be like this," Aahil said after a short, uncomfortable silence. He shifted from one foot to the other. Fiddling with his bag, he put it over the other shoulder. "Just because I have money doesn't mean life was easy for me," he finally got out. "Do you have any idea . . . ?" He stopped and took a deep breath. "It's not easy for me to say this . . . but I'd like to be your friend."


Oh God! I think I just got stabbed by emotions and I'm bleeding heavily. I need to take a deep breath..  And Rehan.. How I miss him so dearly! He was the only person who could really reach out for him.


Rehan turned to stare at Aahil, able to see the pain that Aahil hid from the entire world. For Rehan, Aahil was his brother . . . his family . . . his support. It hurt to see his support hurt liking this.


I was actually surprised when I read Rehan was behind the idea of switching places. I actually thought Aahil would have offered it to him. Nice touch! Clap


And when she had landed in his arms . . . her scent . . . . her voice . . . the way she had felt in his arms . . . all of it had imprinted on him.


Gah... I feel like I'm watching a movie! It's so sophisticated and highly mysterious! And that's what draws me in. I have a thing toward these things.. Day Dreaming


And then they arrive back at Bhopal and met Lateef. I actually smiled sadly upon reading Lateef's words. He has always stayed loyal - at least in my mind he has.


"Do you think I wouldn't recognize the boy that brought me home when I was being beaten up for dressing like a girl? Or the boy who shared his meager amount of food with me?"  
She began to cry loudly,


The small conversation Sanam and Seher had in the night.


"The first time my heart felt something."
  - There was no need for more explanation. You did such a terrific job at that. Simple words which indicates so much. Heart


Can't help gushing over how cute Seher and Rehan are. I miss them terribly.. 


I don't know how to let you know just how much I LOVE the idea behind the story! ClapHeart A huge applause to you, darling. Thank you so much for coming up with such a wonderful idea to pin down.


I wish it was a book.. That way, I could just store it in my book-shelf and take it out whenever I felt like it.. Read whenever I wanted.. - I'm not even being overly kind. It's the honest truth. Hug


You Are Amazing! (Yeah.. I know it's a long comment, but my thoughts are floating around and I can't seem to gather them all..) But you're still an amazing writer and I hope you'll update real soon. Heart

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Posted: 07 July 2015 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
I love your review Mahu Wink

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Posted: 07 July 2015 at 4:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sahil333

I love your review MahuWink


Aww.. Thanks, Hon'! Hug It's all because of our talented writer. She brings out those long comments sometimes.. LOL I cannot wait to read the next part. Waiting eagerly..

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Posted: 07 July 2015 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
This was a very beautiful chapter... like all others were.
 
such a kick ass start of Aahan friendship.. bromanceLOL(genuine wala)
Sanam and Aahil connected so well as kids. Aahil was hurt enough to bleed. Cry But there are sick parents who do that to their kids. Angry
Rehan calls him Aahil Bhai ... that is so sweet.
 
the interactions of the families.. Zoya thought Lateef was a womanLOL
 
So Aahil noticed that Sanam was tensing up. He even noticed her at the function.
good buildup to the story. I like how you have built up everything from the scratch... the characters, situations, families, relations.. everything.Clap and in a matter of 3-4 updates.
Looking forward to the next update.


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Posted: 10 July 2015 at 12:09am | IP Logged
@muskaan17rocks: Thanks! Glad you liked it. I've begun work on the next chapter, but it will probably take a while to come together.

@Kabhibloom - Thanks! The mystery will be revealed slowly but surely. LOL  The twin truth on the other hand, sooner rather than later. Both Sanam and Aahil have had a deep impact on each other and hold each others memory extremely close to their hearts. I've started writing the next chapter, but it will take a while. Embarrassed

@NanduVijay - Thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed Aahil and Rehan's relationship. I loved that bromance, but the CVs seriously dropped the ball on that one too, and then of course killed Rehan off. Cry That won't happen in this story. LOL I'll try to update soon.

@sahil333 - Thanks! Embarrassed I knew you would like the flashbacks, since you mentioned them in a previous comment. Glad to oblige. I'm glad the emotions in those scenes got through. I'm happy you're enjoying the story. Wink Thanks for the banner love; found a new site that seems to make everything really easy for you in terms of banner making.

@sagelower7 - Thanks! Glad you liked the buildup. Big smile

@adventure_gurl - Thanks for the compliment on the mix and the story, I'm happy you're enjoying it. Wink

@mahwash22
- Can I just . . . Hug Who takes the time to say in such detail how much they're enjoying a story? You do and it really, really touched me to know that you're appreciating this story to such a degree. Blushing I love writing, but to read comments like yours truly makes the experience worth while. I am glad you like the idea behind the tale . . . and the interactions Aahil has had with Rehan and Sanam thus far. More to come. I hope you keep on enjoying the story to this same degree. LOL

@minnie2308 - Thanks for the compliments! Glad you liked the bromance, and you're right this is the true bromance not the pale imitation we have on our TVs right now. I'm glad you're liking how the families are set up and their interactions. There's more to come, so please keep on reading and commenting. LOL

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